Mirrissa

Mirrissa breathed loudly "NO!" she screamed hitting the tall man dressed in black "NO!" she screamed again the man thrust her into a wooden box and locked it. Everything turned dark, she thumped on the lid, "No!" the seven year old screamed again "No." she said under her breath. 1

"Bye Mommy!" ten year old Laura screamed out to her mom going outside of her back yard. "Thanks for letting me dig!" she said she'd always wanted to dig in her backyard, mabye find a dinosaur tooth fossil anything cool mabye even a diamond. After Six feet she looked down "Hmm, What's we got here?" She grabbed up the wooden box. "It's locked" she said out loud to her dogs "No key" "and.." she said turning around to make sure no one watched, "It's kinda pretty." She said she ran into her treat house and straped the box to her ropes on her tree house, climbed up and pulled it up to her tree house with her pully. "No one'll find it here" she said, pulling the whole rope of her pully so her mother wouldn't expect it. She ran to the garage her dad wasn't alive anymore so she could now use his tools any time she wanted, she thrust the pully down again, grabbed her dad's big rusty old tool box and tied the pully to it, pulled the pully up, half way up the rope broke, CRASH BANG! The box fell to the ground broke in to two peices, lid and box, an explosion of tools filled the air. She hurried down to get them she threw all the tools into the box and threw it behind the tree. She kept out the screw driver and hammer and pliers, she shuved them in her pocket and climbed up, while her dogs began to fight over the broken rope which was what was let of her magnificant pully. the got the hammer and undid the nails in the box, and got pliers to bust open the rest, "Aha ha gotcha!" she exclaimed happily when she opend the box, until she found out, what was inside.2

Chapter 23

She nearly fell out of her tree house, she *did* fall out but caught herself by holding on to the sixth step on her rope ladder, she hung there, she didn't want to go back up, she didn't want to move she was perilized with fear and got scared and couldn't move finally, she got the corrage to just move. She dusted off her hands and washed them. "Uh?" she asked herself not knowing what she was uhing about. Then she decided to go back up to the tree house. She shivvered when she saw the thing inside, it was true the body of little seven year old Mirrissa.

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