He died on Monday? And?
A contest entry
- 5 words. by Thorn-on-the-Rose.
175 points, ended September 28, 2008, 36 entries
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Very very nice!! Sadly, today's youth is so like this, it's saddening. This guy passed away after a violent football game last year, and the school mourned in real for the passing of one afternoon. The next day, he was forgotten. -__-
Brilliantly done!
-HT
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I find this funny, though I probably shouldn't. It shows how callous youth has become, not caring about a passing of an old friend or the passing of anyone really. Great job!
PR
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Who? What happened? Where ? When ? how? this left too many open questions for me
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Mysterious
Dragged me in
Sad in the death respect
Unique with the day
& intersting how you entered it with a question
GOOD LUCK
Temaria - Blair
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Interesting makes you think what and means. gah, monday is a horrible way to waste one seventh of your life.
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I don't understand why everyone is so in the dark about the "And?" bit. The title points it out that this is a *callous* youth. The "And?" is just a flippant remark, supporting said youth's callousness.
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Hmm, long title, almost as if it's part of the five words.... I don't mind though. it's good, I like how you left it open at the end with the 'and?' good job and good luck in my contest =DD
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okay??? what'cha think and???? is all about. Hummmm....
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It's for a 5 word contest. See title for further insight.
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I love it!!! =D
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