Don't get bored.

Bored. Went skydiving. Now quadriplegic.

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This was my six word story, now it's my five word story. Enjoy.

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  • Dual.Of.Fireflies
    June 26

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    quadriplegic?

    Good idea! I liked it. Very confusing at the first part. I'm happy to say that you did really good!!!


  • Cupcake14
    June 25
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    You really are a specialist at humor, aren't you?


  • Dreams of Insanity
    February 21

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    Wow...what a tragic piece v.v
    However...funny xD
    >.>
    Hope the quadriplegics don't come get me now T_T

  • BurntUmber
    January 22

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    Hahahahahaha!! Funny stuff, dude! Love it, enjoyed it, ate it. Joking! This is a gr8 sixword memoir! Good job - you're in the finals!


  • tonialoise
    January 21

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    hehe... that's silly! By the title I was thinking you didn't want us to get bored with your "long" story. Now I see the warning in it and believe me, I won't get that bored.


  • Tiger-Lily
    October 1, 2008

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    o__o Did I not comment? I found this, as always, amazingly funny for a short piece. Nice wordplay there, uncle Danno. ^_^

    -HT


  • Oddems.
    September 30, 2008

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    I loved this one - humorous and well written. Plus you used a big word.

    PR


  • KitterBean
    September 29, 2008

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    ooooooohhhhhhhh how grim! What a horrible thought! But really actually very brilliant as well. I wouldn't have thought of it! Great job!


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 27, 2008

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    OH LORDY
    FUNNY
    CHARMING
    SERIOUSLY FUCKED UP
    LOVING IT...
    OH GOD ONLY YOU !!!!
    I swear only you....

    GOOD LUCK
    Temaria - Blair


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 26, 2008

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    haha, good, I lke it!! hehe, I had to look up quadripelgic, so you get brownie points for using big words, hehe, oh, and I love your authors notes, hehe, Good luck in my contest,

    -Dani

  • Tomereader
    September 25, 2008

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    Good

    I can see the humour in this and do think it is clever but for me personally it strikes a strong sad note of a young life altered drastically on a permenant basis. I suppose it makes this a bitter-sweet piece. If I had been in the wrong frame of mind when I read it I could almost have called it brutal.

    • DoozerDan silver member
      September 25, 2008
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      Who said he was young?

      Good thing you didn't read it in the wrong frame of mind, haha.

      Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you can see the humour in it. Even if it is a bit to 'black' for you.


  • trekkergirl
    September 25, 2008
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    okay now that's funny too.


  • MsAlee gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    LOL!!!! Great story!


  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    Been done too many times
    I prefer "Parachute for Sale. Small Stain."


    • DoozerDan silver member
      September 24, 2008
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      So enter it in the comp before someone else does!

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