He loved all her lies.
Author notes
Nope. None. Nada.
A contest entry
- 5 words. by Thorn-on-the-Rose.
175 points, ended September 28, 2008, 31 entries
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Hm..intriguing but too abstract for my taste. Is this a metaphorical he? Or is it really a guy? I want to know more now.
-HT -
The words seem to tell a story, yet the story could be anumber of things. It was deep and well written. Great job!
PR
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Ooohhh...is was really deep actually...I got it! haha! Great job! You shoulda got a win with this one! Great job!
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very twisted.
Mysterious
Intruging.
So many placed you could take this.
GOOD LUCK
Temaria - Blair
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Very interesting, realationships, and love, why are such things always tied with lies. *sigh* what is the world coming too.
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Deep and sad. I like it, seems well put together, which means good word order, and yeah, I like it, great job =DD Good luck in my contest =DD
-Dani -
Oooh.... nice! It's really intriguing, this. I think I would actually like to read more...if you plan on there being more. Good luck in the contest.
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interesting. I don't know that I would have said loved. But I kinda like it.
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Very interesting phrase there.
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