My memories

I know I go camping every year but this year it was diffrent1

we were going to celebrate my birthday their it was going to be so 2

awsome!!!!we would ride dirtbikes and four wheelers.I just had one 3

thing wrong my best friend Jacky walsh went to madalene Island just 4

like any other year so who am I going to invite???So i decided 5

to call a friend I have not talk to for a while she came we had6

fun but,when we went riding on the track I was giving my step 7

sister a ride when she came and ran right in to me!I pushed jenni8

off the dirtbike and she sat on the ground while my friend ran into 9

me she said sorry and I had a huge bruise on my leg!i soon let it go 10

and later that night we watched fire works since my birthday is 11

july 2 and that was an awsome summer!!! 12

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  • -Rosie-
    March 23, 2005
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    LoL i wish I were there. Sorry I couldn't make it. -Jacky


  • twinklestart
    March 22, 2005
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    this is a great write! the spelling and spacing could use some help, but otherwise it's great! 4th of July is an awesome holiday. fireworks are awesome!


    ~Addie~

  • AmericanRedneckGirl
    March 21, 2005
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    This is really good. I love watching fireworks, it must be awesome to have ur b-day on july 2, so close to independence day, I love the 4th of july, I always have so much fun!!! Great write

    Novalee