A Massacre

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When dark tears fall2

onto stained shaking hands3

a long kitchen knife,4

dripping with the blood of the victims,5

falls to the ground with a clatter,6

next to the white shadows.7

the contorted shapes of lifeless bodies,8

strewn across the ground9

at the feet of a murderer.10

the bodies grow white,11

white like a pale ghost in the moonlight12

a crimson river starts to flow...

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  • MsAlee
    September 24, 2008
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    Fantastic imagery. I can easily see that crimson river.