The Elevator Hallway

He walked boldly behind her through the crowd, his hand resting on the back of her neck, her hair cascading softly over it. His thumb gently caressed the nape of her neck, sending tingles through her body. He came in closer and made a path for her by moving a staggering, inebriated man out of her way. He bent his head low and drank in the fragrance of her sweet smelling hair. She leaned back into his warm, strong body for a brief moment before slipping between the encroaching crowd of bodies. He watched her before him, her short skirt exposing the round cheeks of her buttocks below fine, black lace panties. He imagined fingering her cheeks and playing with the soft lace, and his heart began to race.1

They approached the elevators to the upper floors of the tall, metropolitan hotel. A large group of rowdy, playful revelers frolicked in the hall before the elevators. As they began the long wait for the elevator to arrive, he leaned against the wall, caressing her exposed shoulder, savoring the smoothness of her soft skin. She stepped back into him, leaning her full body into his. She bent ever so astutely, placing her soft rounded buttocks into his groin and began to grind slowly, teasingly. 2

He bent his head low and softly kissed her shoulder as she leaned her head toward his warming cheek and gave a little hiss. She teasingly licked his earlobe and he began to suck on her shoulder. She breathed deeply into his ear and tantalized his earlobe with the tip of her flickering tongue, ending the tease with a deep suck. 3

She continued to slowly grind as they impatiently waited for the elevator to arrive and with each grind his heart began to beat faster and his temperature rise. He could feel the warmth of her body emanating off her skin. She could feel him becoming harder with each grind and she reveled in it. With each second next to him, her temperature began to rise, along with her desire for him. She placed her hands on each side of his thighs and gently stroked his thighs and hips. 4

He moved his hand to the front of her neck and chest, slowly tracing her features, teasingly extending his finger down ever so slightly into her ample cleavage. She leaned back strongly into his body, pressing him harder against the wall and pushing her breasts out farther, arching to greet his touches. He moved his other hand down to explore the panties he had admired earlier. He traced the edges of the panties and into her crack. She gently opened her legs to greet his touch. 5

He bent low to suck on her neck and traced his finger around the outside edge of the panties to the front and gently caressed her thigh, his thumb falling into the crevice of her pubic area. She let out a little groan and spread a little wider. He could hear both their heartbeats above the raucous of the crowd.6

At this moment, despite the hallway being packed with people, the two lovers were alone. It was just the two of them, exploring each other, fantasizing the possibilities, appealing to each others physical reactions. But no one noticed. No one cared. All were reveling in their own fantasies and didn't notice they were even there. 7

The bell for the elevator rang and the down arrow flashed above one of the doorways. Although most were going up, the crowd began to file into the elevator anyway, simply appreciative to get an elevator at all. As the crowd piled in, the two lovers could see that they would not all be able to fit into the one car. The last of the crowd piled in and they all looked at the two, standing alone in the hallway. The lovers looked back, shook their shoulders and stepped back away from the elevator, allowing it to go on its way. 8

They now found themselves alone in the elevator hallway. She turned and faced her lover with deep longing in her eyes. He peered down at her beautiful flushed face, cupped her face in his hands and caressed her pink, silky cheeks. She gazed up at him with such playful desire that he could think of nothing but her. He traced her luscious perched lips and she licked the tip of his finger gently with her tongue. He slowly pushed his finger into the wetness of her mouth and she gleefully took it in, sucking and tonguing it with sumptuous precision. He pulled it out and traced her lips with his wet finger as she continued to lick it temptingly. He was overcome with desire to taste her lips and quickly encompassed her mouth with his, eagerly taking in her sweetness. She returned his ardent kiss with equal fervor, clasping her hands around his face and pulling him in closer to her, her tongue wildly darting into his open mouth.9

He soon felt the warm, tender touch of her hand on his cock, gently cupping it with playful attention. The warmth grew within him as she astutely kneaded it with adept precision. Her breaths had become deep and hard as the temperature between them rose with each second. She began to pant and let out a deep groan as he moved his hand to her crotch and gently stuck his finger between her wet folds. She slowly lifted her leg ever so slightly to give him more room to explore. He gently stroked his finger over her wet clitoris and she shuddered in his arms, letting out a delighted squeal and cupping his cock harder in her hand. She began to knead him with firmer resolve, extending up the expanding shaft and to the eager head. She fingered the head with special attention, re-explored the now fully hard shaft and then down to his balls, giving a quick, full squeeze. He let out a deep growl, imagining they were alone in their hotel room and what they could be doing. He felt his blood boiling under his skin.10

Suddenly the two realized they were no longer alone. A new elevator-waiting crowd had formed in the hallway around them, unbeknownst to them. The new revelers had not noticed the two lovers. Or, if they had, they paid them no special attention. A couple was heavily making out across the hall from them, on a little exploration trip of their own. The two lovers looked gleefully into each others eyes and she giggled a playful little giggle as they toned down their play and attempted to pull themselves together. 11

The elevator bell rang and the up arrow lit up above the door in front of the lovers. The doors opened, a crowd piled out and the two stepped into the elevator, he pushing the button for the 3rd floor as they stepped through the doors. The elevator was soon crammed with all the other revelers that had been waiting in the hallway with them, crushing the two to the back of the elevator. The doors closed and the car began to rise. 12

The bell rang as they quickly reached the third floor. The lovers asked to be let out and made their way through the crowd in the elevator. As they stepped off the elevator, they heard a loud “It’s about time!” come from down the hall. “We thought we’d lost you guys!” And before they could say a word, she was whisked into the room party by one of her girl friends and he was whisked away to the makeshift bar setup in the second bedroom of the hotel suite. And, so the night of revelry continued…

Author notes

This is a little something that came to me based on an event I recently attended. I haven't edited it yet, so please help me if you notice anything strange... Hope you enjoy!

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  • Stryke Greeters member
    October 31, 2008

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    Good Buildup and tastefully written detail The ending left room for more and left me wondering if pehaps this was a chapter in a larger story. Great job. You're a finalist.


  • TNTrouble
    October 8, 2008

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    Aye...very hot indeed. Nothing like a bit of forbidden and dangerous sex to get the blood flowing. Thank you for posting this...


  • Susan John Francis
    October 8, 2008
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    well it just did Got me HIGH.. your imgination flows wild when u want it to..... GR8

  • archdraconis
    October 5, 2008

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    blase

    It is an interesting story to be sure, and I was into it (the paragraphs were a touch long) but I think you can do so much more with it, the -suggestions- of vulgarity without mentioning things. I mean, does everyone have to have a "firm round ass?"

    There are also things that throw the story off. the problem with "c*ck and "suck" is that they are hard words, which totally intrude in the writing. True, you don't want to start writing things like "His flaming sword." but I think it would have been more interesting to realise what they were both doing with a "Whoa?!"

    The ending was good, until it ended with "the revelry continued." End it right when they are pulled apart, leaving your audience wanting /just/ like the characters want.

  • Raeyle
    October 5, 2008
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    WOW....I wonder what kind of event was that. I like how you put in that they were alone in a crowd, and I think that shows a higher level of intimacy than mere joining of bodies could ever do. And I think that in the midst of an erotic story to see this is quite an interesting twist.

    Keep Writing.

  • MsAlee
    October 4, 2008
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    WOW! Very HOT! Just the idea of being so out in the open.

  • KitterBean
    October 2, 2008

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    Some of the paragraphs were too long, but i really found the story to be wodnerful. Good work.

    Cat

  • comatose princess
    October 1, 2008
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    Oh, the tension! I liked it.


  • RxxSpiritWolfxxJ Moderators member
    October 1, 2008
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    I second that.

    Very interesting. Well written too

  • Artful Dodger
    September 24, 2008
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    o.o

    Interesting...

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