I came home and began running my bath... Steaming hot as usual. As I layed down I be...
Author notes
Told from the first person perspective of some random woman... The last word is began... and then she dies... I'ma write a sequel from another POV later... gonna be a bit of a murder mystery
And yes I realize B-E out of began is actually .4... I'm sorry I couldn't think of a word with 10 letters that fit there
A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Umm... This seems kind of like you were writing a longer story and got cut off. Interesting beginning, it is, but it doesn't make me want to read more. Perhaps you should make this a 137 word story?
Thanks for entering =)
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Ha I might have gone with 137 words but I wrote it with like 4 hours before the contest was over so I didnt have much time to think
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You creep me out sometimes... mostly just because most the time i understand things others don't any who... I am glad you are writing on here... i like seeing the little note thing come up with you and your new story...
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