The name is Erik. You're probably wondering by now what's so interesting about me that I have to talk about it. Well, it's a bit of a long story, so make yourself comfortable.1
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She looked at me fearfully. To reassure her, without even considering that she might not be bluffing, I said, "I'm not afraid of werewolves. I could only be afraid of losing you."3
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And that's how I got here. That's how I died. Oh, but I haven't given up yet. There's always a chance to beat Death itself, even. Whatever it takes for her, because I know she's still somewhere on the surface. I'm not there for her. She's not happy. But I can change that. Just you wait and see.
A contest entry
- Beginning, Middle and End Paragraphs - Easy Points! by Melancholic Smile.
375 points, ended October 17, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, he dies and still it's not the end. NICE. Now that is determination. I wonder, did she kill him? Or did something else?
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I like this! Something grabbed my attention about it which surprised me as I am not much of a werewolf fan at all! But something about this teaser made me want to read more, so well done and thanks for entering!
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First werewolves.
Yay I loved them
Secondly- it is not cliche is it..gah please tell me no.
Thirdly - what inspired the story - I wanna know so I can read it and fourthly
GOOD LUCK
Blair- Temaria
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First: Thanks, I think they're pretty cool when done right.
Second: I think that if you had the bare-bones plot of this, yes it would be cliche. But there are all those oddities in between that make it more different.
Third: It was inspired by... my actual ex-girlfriend who genuinely and truly believes that she's a werewolf. And CLAIMS that she broke up with me so I wouldn't get hurt. Yes, she's always been a little odd in the head. xD
Fourth: Thank you.
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O.o Werewolf!!!
Nice write, though a little short, since you left me hanging.
I want to know what else happens. anywho, keep penning and i wanna see what you come up with next.
Ruth 
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Well, this little thing is a fragment from it, made for a contest. The full version is somewhere among my stories, and I actually posted the sequel to it fairly recently. Go check it out if you're interested.
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