Let me begin at the very beginning for me. The year was 1974 and my parents for some strange reason saw it fit to have a second child. That child was born into the world, to their disappointment, female. Anthony, they had wanted to call me after my Grandfather, and so I was named Antoniette. They and everyone else always called me Toni. Go figure.1
Perhaps I was winning. After several days of relentless obedience, I could tell he was tiring of me. I just wasn't as much of a challenge for him anymore. He ignored me more. Instead of staring blankly at the walls or him, I was permitted use of the laptop. He'd allow me to eat, drink, and use the restroom freely. I still wasn't granted the one thing I wanted most; to leave this room.2
His teeth pierced me.
Author notes
Ok, I guess it doesn't look like much of a sandwich when the ending paragraph is one short sentence. I guess it's more like an upside down hors d'œuvre.
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A contest entry
- Beginning, Middle and End Paragraphs - Easy Points! by Melancholic Smile.
375 points, ended October 17, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
so is this enough to make one interested in reading a long story?
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In a room she can't leave? Piercing teeth? Ack! What happenssssss? Hee hee. That's one heckuva teaser there!
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thanks glad I could hook you a bit. 
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I like this I found myself trying to guess what might have happened to make her end up being kept in a room so you certainly intrigued me. I found myself wanting to read more of this. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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This story has me deeply intruiged.
So he keeps her or him in a room?
This is so cool, I love it.... I want to read it:
please send me some of the chapters.
Good luck
Temaria - Blair
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yes. I cant wait to see how this ends up. I loved every single chapter u wrote =)
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not bad .
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