What is life?1
A roller coaster with it's ups and downs.2
A torment of emotions that aren't understandable, but that each one goes through, but3
life without love is not life,4
life without you isn't life,5
for you are my life, my passion, my reason to exist,6
for you i awake each day...7
for you i live...8
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good
It was a good poem and it shows good emotion. A suggestion from me would to capitalize all the I's. But overall a good poem -
thanx for the comment
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....I know how it is to feel so0o0o0o0o00o strongly about someone....good job, keep up the good work..................MuchLoveAlways~ s1l3ntscr34ms
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