☆☆Z.O.E: The Fist of Mars☆☆1
☆Introduction☆2
Most of the Earth's natural resourses had finally been exhausted, and the tiny planet was unable to support the soaring population of humans. In 2045, mankind began to look beyong Earth for solutions and built the 1st Earth-Space Track Orbital Elevator. The "Space Age" had officially begun, and countries all over the world dove into countless research and space development plans. It was then that the human race created and discovered several new tools that would change life forever; the LEV (Laborious Extra-Orbital Vehicle), a piolet-controlled interspace robot; the resourse Metatron, excavated from the Jupiter moon, Callisto; and the Urenbeck Catapult, a device which, by manipulating space, enabled hyper-speed travel. The discovery and invention of these so-called "tools" expedited the progress of the space development project resulting in an exodus into space; in the span of a single century, more than 20 million people took up residence in colonies on The Moon, Mars, and Jupiter territory. The transition from Earth to Space seemed to be going smoothly - however, new conflicts were just beginning to materialize. Human beings left on Earth began to refer to these colonists as "Enders", a derogatory term for those "living at the end of civilization" expressing their prejudiced attitude towards non-earth inhabitants. In response, these immagrants, who were subject to discrimination on top of living in harsh enviorments bonded together in their bitterness against Earth... and tensions between the 2 groups would only be magnified as time passed. In 2158, anger on the immagrant side lulminated in the forming of BARHAM, an anti-earth military unit based on Vacilia Country Mars - and it's subsequent clandestine invention of the Metatron Orbital Frame. An entirely new type of LEV-like machine. From there, it was one tragety after another. The Deimos Incident. Anterior Intervention. The treat of the Orbital Elevatod Destruction. Since the advent of BARHAM and the Orbital Frame, the already precarious equilibrium keeping the peace between Earth and Space was rapidly falling apart. And in 2173, amidst the politican turmoil, another ship filled with immagrants left Earth for the Zone of the Enders...
Ok. Here is the introduction to my sequel. Please tell me if you hate it, love it, like it, discriminate it (Misa), whatever. I worked really hard on this so atleast give me some credit for it. Thanks
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i wanna LEV for christmas now ^_^ any way just make sure you theres an explosion somewhere
DSM
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Oh wow. You wanna LEV now?
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Wow ... i like Lissy comment WOW great start
me likey alot XD 
DNY--
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Like it? I FREAKIN' LOVE IT!!! Did you get the idea from Bio-X?
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Sounds really interesting - I'll defintely have to read more after you post it! Great words and awesome descriptions, makes me wonder if they're going to go into a (as Lissy said) all-out devastating war...hmm....write more and NOW!
He he, great job and keep on writing.
PR
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Really nice, Hisana~ Keep it up!!
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Very... "Scientific" if you will. And thanks for the discrimination title, as I am very pessimistic about things, as well as diiscriminate.
But, a pretty good start, I just would liek to see if you can continue with quite the few numbers of chapters... -
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I will. And no problem.
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Wow!
This is soooooooooo good! Half the words I don't eve know, and I'm like a walking dictionary! Great choice of words, it sounds so intelligent and awesome!!! I am really curious as to what happens! Will they fight an all-out devastating war!? Lissy must know! Oh, excellent! Your writing is wonderful! The idea in itself is just plain...magnificent! Great job, Nancy! Lissy is so excited! XD 
Please continue! -Lissy
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Thank you Lissy! I knew some words and I used a dictionary. I'm so grateful. I got my talent back from Innocent W. Yes! It's going to be a looong story and this time, I WILL make sure to put it up here.
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