" Victoria I love You"1
Once apon a time there was a boy and a girl boy loved girlvery much and was forced to watch her go with bad boy after bad boy. Girl saw al her boys were bad but one the good boy. she saw she always went to him and how he was always there for her. 2
Seasons Changed. 3
Girl and Boy grew more close over the months he fell madly in love with her. But then had a chance to leave from his home ware he lived with a most wicked of witches witch. He thought about her spent a lot of time with girl but decided it was hopeless and decided to leave. When boy left he couldt help thining this was all wrong but he ignored it and left. Months past he knew he had made a mistake so he tried to forget about her, pushing her away. 4
Time pased. 5
One day a friend of boy and girl told boy girl was engaged. Soon after girl called him to talk. He was very up set you see and she knew it before she hung up she told him she loved him and boy said "I love you too". After the call ended boy stared at the phone thinking of girl. He sat down in the road and cried he saw what he lost. 6
The Universe is boundless. 7
The End Of My reason Behind My Last Words.
Author notes
Sorry it was way longer then you asked I came up ith it right after the words and I was forced to write it by my mind.
A contest entry
- Voiceless in 5....4....3....2.... by Reaver.
370 points, ended September 24, 2008, 34 entries
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Comments
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TheRedPen,
Very simple and to the point. Was kinda long, but yea, it works. The simplisity of the words was only made stronger by what followed, so i love how you truely thougth about this. You're a finalist. Great job!
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very sweet...
good luck in the contest!
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INTERESTING: YES LONGER THAN ANTICIPATED: BUT AT LEAST YOU WERE HONEST AND BLUNT.
good luck with the contest
Blake ♣
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