What I Pray

Finally I am not surprised,
By this recent lie advertised.
I really wanted to trust,
That it was love over lust.1

You didn't want to hurt me anymore,
Don't worry, you did not you whore.
I'll never love again,
Including you, Jenn.2

You only prove that I don't deserve,
Any of this love I have to observe.
I see people in love day after day,
I'll never have that, but it's what I pray.

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  • Siby Anan
    January 11

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    Did you and Jenn break up? D:
    This poem sounds like it was written in a time of pain.

    The poem's great :]


  • Intoxica
    September 26, 2008

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    Clearly this wh*re does not deserve your love.
    I don't know if this is based on an experience of yours, but yes it's fairly well written.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 21, 2008
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    Ah long time no read a poem by you.
    But I can sense resentment and bitterness and cynicism of love in this poem and I can dare say this woman crossed the boarder and crushed everything you believed that love could be.

    Don't close yourself over
    heal
    It gets worse before it gets better
    But the outcome is one to cherish.

    I know.
    Believe me.

    well done
    Blair