I can't

I can't eat, I can't sleep, I can't breath, I can't go on without yo..

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
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  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    A little cliche, but good thought. It's scarily true for some people, and it's often hard to put into words. Especially in so few words. Good job and thanks for entering =)

    ~Aura ♥


    • Lonesome Dove
      September 26, 2008
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      Although cliche... I'm afraid, I'm guilty. Thank you for your comment.


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 24, 2008

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    aww, cute!! wait, it's!! sad, did she/he die!! aww, that's the impression I got =(( I like this, good job =DD

    -Dani