-You have to write this story.1
-No, this is the one thing I refuse to write about.2
-You have to write this story.3
-No, I refuse.4
-You have no choice.5
-I...I just can't.6
-You have no choice.7
-Please Don't make me do this.8
-Just start with the first sentence.9
“Come to the beach with me.” Or should I have started with “I've never felt like this about anyone.” Or maybe “I'm sorry, I don't feel the same.”?10
-I can't. I won't. It belongs in my head. It belongs between me and her and no one else. No, I don't want to tell.11
-Just start with the first sentence.12
-How about “Hey frosh what's up?” Or “I have to tell you something.” That phone call and the conversation following. This cannot be. Those words cannot be undone.
Author notes
I'm not really sure. Trying to explore my resistance to writing about certain things.
A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Very interesting story =) I like the format you put it in. One thing is that its a little hard to tell who said what, especially in one area. Paragraphs 8-11, its almost as if the speaker switches identity.
Thanks for the entry =) And good job on the 137 words front.
~Aura ♥
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