She heard, "Mommy, I had a nightmare."1
"What about?"2
"Dying alone"3
"That's awful, Alee."4
"Can it ha...zzzzzzz?"
A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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lol, that poor little girl/boy, I love how her mom feel asleep on her, hahaha, great job!! good luck in that contest =DD
-Dani -
Aww, thats cute. Well, the dying alone part is kinda saddening, but its cute how she fell asleep again. Wonderful use of the limiting words =) It seems long, yet its short. Thanks for entering!
~Aura ♥ -
Interesting...but I do not really understand this? Did she end up dying because if so her mum was there so twas not alone?
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LOL, no she didn't die she fell back to sleep hence the zzzzz
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