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mmm, Antasha, ohhh, *pants*. *slides of the bed, and pulls her clothes on and grunts. Antasha ìs this gorgeous american indian girl with this skin as clear as the sky, eyes darker then the blackest of all, and lips so soft, so soft i cant explain. Anyways, Shes not my first girlfriend nor the last but i can say she is amazing in bed and outside of the world. 2

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Im at collage, studying to be a doctor, but some people like my parents think that Im not quatlified to be a doctor because the way i act and the way i dress. But I proved her white little *boop* that i could and now we hold a grudge for enternity.4

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Antasha, my babe, I hollered, she didnt turn. ANTASHA!!! I hollered again, jeez, cant the *boop* just *boop* turn around. You know what screw her, I dont need her, right?. Ugh, I love her, I cant forget her, she runs through my mind all day. Finally she turns around and looked at me and smiled her most stunning smile. And I smile back6

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As I was going to my class, this girl, Terri. She grabbed my arm and whipped it around, causing me to spin around and dropping my books. Holy jeez girl, trying to pull my arm off?, Terri was panting like a mad woman that killed for the first time. She was asked me if I was going out with Antasha.8

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I was stunned that she would dared to ask me that but, wow! her question had shocked me, I turned and walked away, nevered looked back. She started yelling *boop* at me and i raised my hand stuck out my middle finger and i heard her gasped. I laughed and kept my nose up high.10

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Five hours later, Antasha and I are in bed, laughing and giggling. My *boop* are rigid, and singing with pleasure when Antasha is following my creases with her tounge. She put her fingers together and slipped into my *boop* and pushed harder and faster every minute.12

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  • Upon Deaths Meeting
    September 28, 2008
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    This was very well written, Trixie. I think you have a talent for this genre, but you need a little help with your grammar. If you fix that, you'll be a great author.

    Meet your characters and find out if they like the way you have created them... and then you'll know for sure about what they believe in.