They're coming for me, Max. They're going to kill me. There isn't much time. 1
I love you. 2
Goodb
Author notes
17.5 Words. I kind of like it. :] Though I suppose it's sort of 17 and 2/3 words. But it wouldn't have made sense if I cut it off sooner.
A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good
A complete story in such a few words, really good start on a murder mystery.
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Thank you!
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That's really efing good!!
Loving this, and the title helped...
Great stuffness.
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aww, It's sad, I like it's cute and sad, great job!! keep it up and good luck in that contest =dDD
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Wow, really interesting. Sudden, and intense. I'll allow the 2/3rds thing because you're right, it wouldn't have made sense otherwise. This kind of makes you wonder; who are they? And why are they going to kill her? And who's Max? So yeah, very interesting and thought provoking. Perhaps it would make a good story prompt. Thanks for entering!!
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I was hoping it would be kind of like "wait, what happened?" :]
Thanks again!
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