When I look into your emerald eyes1
I get lost in a world that's all my own2
A world filled with pleasure, grace, and longing3
A world filled with smiles, secrets, and tears4
When I look into your emerald eyes5
If not for an instant,6
Everything is perfect
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Comments
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VERY SHORT: BUT VERY TO THE POINT.
I always refer to green eyes as emerald gems and you capture the beauty of what lays beneath the eyes very well. What you see, what you feel and sense.
very well done.
♣ blake
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