Looking around I see a magical wonderland surrounding me. Fairies play together, dancing delicately on their tip-toes. Fluffy marshmallow clouds are used as trampolines; twinkling bodies propel through the air. 1
Beautiful rivers sparkle and this wondrous kingdom mirrors back at me. In the water's reflection I can see the fairies dance. Everything here is so enchanting and fascinating. 2
With no warning I step backwards off the feathery cloud and begin tumbling at the speed of light down towards the earth. I cannot see where I'm heading, I'm falling backwards. I want to scream for someone to help me but my words are stuck.3
I hit the ground hard, yet my eyes open and their voices are all around me. 4
"We've got her back, we've got her back" 5
The doctors have brought me back. It wasn't my time yet for the magical kingdom.6
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A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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...wow. HOW did you get it to be 137 exactly by the SW counter?? Thats like.. unheard of. To get it to be exactly what you want. I am amazed.
Now, on to the story itself, haha! Oh wow, I actually didn't see the ending coming. I love how its like...a personalized version of heaven. Awesome. I love the imagery created in this piece, its fantastic. Good job and thanks for entering =)
~Aura ♥
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