Her black glossy nails dug into his soft, fragile neck. She bit into him, sucking all of his blood. He was helpless, soon he began to weaken and fall to the floor. She pulled away. Blood dripping from her black lips, she wiped her mouth and smirked. "Satan was correct, humans are pathetic." The man, way into his mid-twentys, slumped lifelessly onto the gravel. His neck revealed blood vessels, a slice of dead flesh hung from the huge cut, only attatched by a single thread. The girl stood tall, proud of her doings. She wore a grey short skirt, and tall grey boots, that were abit too big for her around the top of her legs. Her top was also grey, almost like vest top, but was covered with metal chains. All of her clothings were metal, but she was able to move easily within them. She wore metal shields all the way across her two lower arms, that stopped upto her wrists. Her hair was naturual curly, it was blonde with streaks of brunette. Her lips were always crimson red, but she had tried to cover it up with black lip-stick. Her first impressions were a goth, mixed with a middle-ages, Hercules ages warrior princess. She was nearly identical to Xena, the warrior princess, who was said to have had many fearless journeys and adventures. But this girl was different from Xena. She had just arisen from her grave, and had had the first filling meal in ten thousand years. Alot had changed since she had been around. The world had conquered eternal darkness, and technology had taken over. But not for long. As soon as possible, Celeste would have the world back to how it should be... 1
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"How is Earth, my evil?" Satan asked. The question rang in Celeste's head, until she finally realised that he was using telepathy.3
"It's certainly different from when I left it." Celeste smirked, then scowled at the thought of Darrien. That boy would have been the end of her, and if she hadnt of acted so quickly he would have vanquished her within seconds. And now a new slayer wondered the Earth, she had to find them before they found her.4
"We will find them, dont you worry. But for now you will need to blend in with... the Earthings. See how many friendships you can create, once you have a trustworthy friendship, you may succeed in your fill." Celeste couldnt see Satan, but she could feel his voice become louder and more merrier.5
"How may I blend in. It's not like I know the new wonders of the planet? Technology has taken over, and there is no space for vampires, demons... even Gins. No one would believe I existed." Celeste sighed at the sight of a group of humans laughing and skipping on the road. Obviously drunk. They screamed, and ran about stupidly.6
"I will leave you in peace, to think. You need to change your style. Metal, Steel and Titanium clothes aren't humans favourites any more." Satan tuned out. Celeste narrowed her eyes, as she watched the drunken teen fall about in humungas bundles of laughter. 7
All of a sudden a very unique idea sprung into Celeste's head, her eyes began to glow a deep crimson...8
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Certainly a sytle that is not typical on this site. I can see you enjoyed writing this piece. Thanks for entering it in our contest.
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even more brill
wow i love it even more now i want to read more and more 1 thing through when it say ' before the found me change it to they or him/her just pointen out any way it is a great story can't wait to read more of it -
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i love this atory i can really picture the characters plz add more cose i want to read more of it and also you really kept my attention well done and keep on writtin -
thats pretty good. i hope you'll be adding more, because im sure many would love to read it, as well as myself. keep up the great work.
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