I kneel down as the snake slithers over your sweet body...smiling at you with reassurance in My eyes. 1
"Just stay still baby. Just relax and he will do you no harm. Who knows...you might get to liking it." you do as I say and I see your entire body melt into the chair...Lucifer crawls around your belly...over your breasts...which causes a gasp from you. But tis not a bad gasp...your nipples are hard and you are licking your lips sensually. He then curls round your neck and stays still...not choking you but almost as if in a hug. 2
"Go ahead My slave...pet him." I tell you as I untie your arms. you shake your hands a bit...getting the blood flowing again. Then you gingerly reach up and pet the snake. He wriggles in delight then slides back down your body...over your belly and toward your pussy. I watch as your pink flesh throbs while his scales tease over it...I love to watch you getting more and more excited... until once again you are begging me. 3
"Please Master...may I cum?" your eyes are glazed and still tied down thighs are tense with the desire to release more pent up pleasures. 4
"Yes My pet...you may cum." I agree...and watch as you explode with the force of your orgasm...body heaving and screams erupting from your mouth. Luce seems to get into this too as his rubbing against your pussy intensifies...and he lays his head on your belly with genuine affection. 5
Finally...spent and panting...you look at Me and whisper "I think I can pee now Master." 6
I smile and say "Let Me get the snake out of the way first." A very sticky but content snake tis returned to his cage...and I reach down to untie your feet. I gently pull you off the chair releasing you from the dildo and then pulling you into My arms to cradle you like a child. I walk into the bathroom with you still held thus."you have done very well baby...I think you have earned the privilege of pissing in private now." 7
you sigh in My arms "oh but Master...I wish to do so in front of you now. Please?" 8
How can I refuse when you ask so sweetly? 9
I stand against the wall...arms crossed and an amused look on My face.10
“Go right ahead then My pet...I will be happy to watch you.” 11
you smile sweetly at Me...but this smile turns to a look of sheer pain as the piss begins to flow. you cry out in pain and despite Myself I come forward in order to kneel beside you and stroke your cheek soothingly. 12
“Hurts a bit does it darlin'?” I ask softy.13
“Y-yes Master.” you shudder all over as the stream grows...clearly orange in its colour. I cannot help but watch your poor abused cunt gushing with the liquid. So red and tender it looks...so swollen and puffy. Even though it hurts you...to Me it looks so beautiful to watch you piss in this condition. 14
“Need help?” I inquire when at last you have finished. Without waiting for a response I fill a large silver goblet with warm water and pour it over your pussy. I continue refilling and emptying the goblet until you sigh and give Me a weary smile. 15
“That feels much better Master” 16
I now take a soft towel and gently pat you dry...taking an occasional nibble of your neck as I do so. When you start to giggle softly I decide tis time for another change. Enough being tender. 17
“Time for the final test” I warn you as I put the towel into the hamper and turn toward you with a wicked gleam in My eyes. 18
your eyes widen and you look frightened again. “What would that be Master?” 19
I take your hands in Mine and nod toward the bedroom again. “Come with Me and find out...” 20
In the room I command for you to lay down on your stomach...face down into the pillow. 21
“Do I need to gag you My pet...or shall you be able to keep from screaming?” 22
you lift your head to turn around and look it Me. “Uhmm well...what is it you are planning to do Master?” 23
“I take that as a yes” I reply and pull a black scarf from the pile of toys on the floor “I do think though that this will suffice.” 24
your relief at not having to wear the ball gag is clear in your eyes. I tie the scarf around your mouth securely and you return your head to its place on the pillow. I bring My face very close to your ear and whisper softly into it. 25
“Do you love Me My slave?” you nod and moan in response. “Are you willing to do anything to prove that to Me?” Again you nod. 26
I get off the bed and begin digging for what I want...it must be just the right one. Ahhh. Here tis. your eyes follow Me as I walk from the pile on the floor back to the bed. They widen as they see the glint of what I hold in My hand. 27
“Are you ready for graduation now My darling?” 28
Eyes full of fear but also overflowing with love as well you nod again. I briefly consider, then reach for the bottle of whiskey that sits on the bedstand. I swab your shoulder with this...then without a moment's further hesitation...I begin.29
Using the knife in quick and sharp movements... I carve My name in capital letters on your shoulder. At first you move convulsively as I cut...but I warn you “If you move too much I might cut deeper than I mean to” so that you force yourself to remain still. In fact you are so still now that you are tense as a taut rubber band. Sweat is breaking out in a thin film all over your body.30
your screams... which are stifled somewhat by the scarf around your mouth... subside after a bit and by the time I have completed the final letter you are merely shuddering a bit and moaning. 31
Next of course I must drink of this sweet blood that I have made flow from your body. It tastes better than any I have every sampled...and tis slightly tinged with the alcohol I used to clean the area. your moans become louder and more sexual in nature. I lift one hand to stroke your hair as I lick the blood until it stops flowing...then swab the word that now marks you as Mine with more of the whiskey. 32
I reach up to untie the scarf from your mouth and you whisper “May I please see what you did Master?” 33
“Yes you may” I agree and we go into the bathroom together. I give you a hand mirror so that you may properly see your back. When you see what I have carved into your back...My name... you gasp and then drop the hand mirror in your excitement to throw your lovely arms around me in a spontaneous hug. I am touched...and find a brief welling up within Myself as well. Unbidden emotion that takes My breath away for a moment...34
“Now I truly DO belong to you Master” you sigh happily as I hold you close to Me and breathe in your breath...feel your heartbeat and mine joining together. 35
“Yes My darling...now you do.” 36
~the End~
"Just stay still baby. Just relax and he will do you no harm. Who knows...you might get to liking it." you do as I say and I see your entire body melt into the chair...Lucifer crawls around your belly...over your breasts...which causes a gasp from you. But tis not a bad gasp...your nipples are hard and you are licking your lips sensually. He then curls round your neck and stays still...not choking you but almost as if in a hug. 2
"Go ahead My slave...pet him." I tell you as I untie your arms. you shake your hands a bit...getting the blood flowing again. Then you gingerly reach up and pet the snake. He wriggles in delight then slides back down your body...over your belly and toward your pussy. I watch as your pink flesh throbs while his scales tease over it...I love to watch you getting more and more excited... until once again you are begging me. 3
"Please Master...may I cum?" your eyes are glazed and still tied down thighs are tense with the desire to release more pent up pleasures. 4
"Yes My pet...you may cum." I agree...and watch as you explode with the force of your orgasm...body heaving and screams erupting from your mouth. Luce seems to get into this too as his rubbing against your pussy intensifies...and he lays his head on your belly with genuine affection. 5
Finally...spent and panting...you look at Me and whisper "I think I can pee now Master." 6
I smile and say "Let Me get the snake out of the way first." A very sticky but content snake tis returned to his cage...and I reach down to untie your feet. I gently pull you off the chair releasing you from the dildo and then pulling you into My arms to cradle you like a child. I walk into the bathroom with you still held thus."you have done very well baby...I think you have earned the privilege of pissing in private now." 7
you sigh in My arms "oh but Master...I wish to do so in front of you now. Please?" 8
How can I refuse when you ask so sweetly? 9
I stand against the wall...arms crossed and an amused look on My face.10
“Go right ahead then My pet...I will be happy to watch you.” 11
you smile sweetly at Me...but this smile turns to a look of sheer pain as the piss begins to flow. you cry out in pain and despite Myself I come forward in order to kneel beside you and stroke your cheek soothingly. 12
“Hurts a bit does it darlin'?” I ask softy.13
“Y-yes Master.” you shudder all over as the stream grows...clearly orange in its colour. I cannot help but watch your poor abused cunt gushing with the liquid. So red and tender it looks...so swollen and puffy. Even though it hurts you...to Me it looks so beautiful to watch you piss in this condition. 14
“Need help?” I inquire when at last you have finished. Without waiting for a response I fill a large silver goblet with warm water and pour it over your pussy. I continue refilling and emptying the goblet until you sigh and give Me a weary smile. 15
“That feels much better Master” 16
I now take a soft towel and gently pat you dry...taking an occasional nibble of your neck as I do so. When you start to giggle softly I decide tis time for another change. Enough being tender. 17
“Time for the final test” I warn you as I put the towel into the hamper and turn toward you with a wicked gleam in My eyes. 18
your eyes widen and you look frightened again. “What would that be Master?” 19
I take your hands in Mine and nod toward the bedroom again. “Come with Me and find out...” 20
In the room I command for you to lay down on your stomach...face down into the pillow. 21
“Do I need to gag you My pet...or shall you be able to keep from screaming?” 22
you lift your head to turn around and look it Me. “Uhmm well...what is it you are planning to do Master?” 23
“I take that as a yes” I reply and pull a black scarf from the pile of toys on the floor “I do think though that this will suffice.” 24
your relief at not having to wear the ball gag is clear in your eyes. I tie the scarf around your mouth securely and you return your head to its place on the pillow. I bring My face very close to your ear and whisper softly into it. 25
“Do you love Me My slave?” you nod and moan in response. “Are you willing to do anything to prove that to Me?” Again you nod. 26
I get off the bed and begin digging for what I want...it must be just the right one. Ahhh. Here tis. your eyes follow Me as I walk from the pile on the floor back to the bed. They widen as they see the glint of what I hold in My hand. 27
“Are you ready for graduation now My darling?” 28
Eyes full of fear but also overflowing with love as well you nod again. I briefly consider, then reach for the bottle of whiskey that sits on the bedstand. I swab your shoulder with this...then without a moment's further hesitation...I begin.29
Using the knife in quick and sharp movements... I carve My name in capital letters on your shoulder. At first you move convulsively as I cut...but I warn you “If you move too much I might cut deeper than I mean to” so that you force yourself to remain still. In fact you are so still now that you are tense as a taut rubber band. Sweat is breaking out in a thin film all over your body.30
your screams... which are stifled somewhat by the scarf around your mouth... subside after a bit and by the time I have completed the final letter you are merely shuddering a bit and moaning. 31
Next of course I must drink of this sweet blood that I have made flow from your body. It tastes better than any I have every sampled...and tis slightly tinged with the alcohol I used to clean the area. your moans become louder and more sexual in nature. I lift one hand to stroke your hair as I lick the blood until it stops flowing...then swab the word that now marks you as Mine with more of the whiskey. 32
I reach up to untie the scarf from your mouth and you whisper “May I please see what you did Master?” 33
“Yes you may” I agree and we go into the bathroom together. I give you a hand mirror so that you may properly see your back. When you see what I have carved into your back...My name... you gasp and then drop the hand mirror in your excitement to throw your lovely arms around me in a spontaneous hug. I am touched...and find a brief welling up within Myself as well. Unbidden emotion that takes My breath away for a moment...34
“Now I truly DO belong to you Master” you sigh happily as I hold you close to Me and breathe in your breath...feel your heartbeat and mine joining together. 35
“Yes My darling...now you do.” 36
~the End~
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Comments
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Very good ending, T.
I enjoyed this story very much.
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I'll have to agree with Rian, you did quite a good job. I know I may be a slut, (btw, I don't give a shit) but guys have never pleasured me like THAT before. I the snake part. Good work.
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NOOOOOOO! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END THE STORY!!!??? You did an awesome job!
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I loved this story, the flow was so strong. The visual descriptions as well, It was wonderful down to every last mintue. Great Job! Thank You for entering my contest and Good Luck!
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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow. I'll be here tomorrow to give you my chapter four.
Thanks!
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I really enjoyed the story, but the missing punctuation and missed captials distracted me from the overal. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck in the other one.
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To be mark with the name of a Master, so the world around knows you are own, is special, for it in a way is a brand that is so powerful, and to allow the snake to be part of the test, the feel of it against the skin as it goes from one part to another, is one way to make the body tingle all over.
Sexy

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Really beautiful and gentle ending... I liked it a lot. The idea of having someone's name cut into you was twisted, and then her liking it was even more so. Great job on this story! You have a real talent for the emotions and feelings behind it. Keep writing and best of luck with future stories!!!! !


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Brilliant!!
-Giggles- I read this one before... And it is what brought me here. -soft smile- I have read many stories on this topic and yours is one of the best. You had me from beginning to end, captivated. I would say you have a calling in dark erotica, but your talent is more diverse then that. Beautifully written. -
Totally sexy and arousing I loved this ending so much! Good job *applauds*


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I am glad you liked the ending. Thank you.
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~claps hands in glee~ Yay! You finished this wonderful piece and I really love how you did it. Great ending to a hot story!


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another perfect story thank u I was waiting for part 4
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I am glad you enjoyed this...I certainly enjoyed writing it.
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Ahhhh...glad you liked.
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Beautiful ending T. Tis good to know there is a happy ending for your dear pet and her Master.
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Perhaps tis something you would be needing to ask Me in private message ehhh?
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*blush*
Yes I do believe you are right, as you know though my mind wasn't functioning completely when I made that response.
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Tis something you need to be asking in private ehhh?
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Grammar and punctuation errors yes !!!
But I have no issue with it what so ever.
To be honest I have been waiting a long time for someone to pin my fetish, well my desires into a story- One that I at the moment cannot. So it was extreamly hot and satisftying and I am not ashamed to say you got a reaction for sure..... wet, sodden and ready to release myself.
what can I say- no shame
your story has none either which makes it a brilliat read
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Aye...I tend to write how I talk which tis not always good. But glad you liked it anyways.
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