softly sleeping, softly weeping, I hear the oceans breeze,1
felt upon my back, the chill of softly frozen fe...
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A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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i love it!! it's soo deep and very descriptive for soo few words, I could almost see this in my head!! lol, great job =DDD
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thank you :]
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this is interesting, it has a great rhythm and movement and I want more Please a whole poem.. PLEASE this is amazing
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lol ok
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oooh, I like it! It has a nice rhythm to it, almost like its simply meant to be read out loud, or sung. Very pretty choice of words. Great job =) Thanks for the entry!!
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thanks :]
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