“Hello?”1
...2
“Hey Dan! It's you!”3
...?4
“No, I'm driving.”5
...!6
“Don't be my mother! I can talk and dr- SHIT!! ”7
...?8
...?!9
...?!
Author notes
A story in 17.3 words, approximately. Thank you Aura for this wonderful and challenging concept!
A contest entry
- Not so new but definitely interesting by DuchessAura of Brie.
350 points, ended September 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Short short short!! by Thorn-on-the-Rose.
175 points, ended September 28, 2008, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Anything is appreciated...
Comments
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loved it, lol, great job, very cool. I hate losing reception on my phone, grr... great job!! Good luck in the contests (including mine =DD)
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grrr it is! Thank you for hosting
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LOL!!! I love it. It sucks to be cut off within any conversation just because of cell coverage. Good luck!
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Yeah.. Thats the point.. The other one never knew if it was coverage problem or some accident. Glad you liked it. Thank you!
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Don't you just hate when this happens! Totally true which makes it good! good luck in the contest!
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Thanks Rian, for the applause. Glad you liked it!
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It's bloody brilliant!
I loved how you used just one side of the convo to extend the story further within your word limit. It's great, it's clever, and I love it. I hope you win something in the contest for this marvelous effort.
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Thank you very much. Glad to see someone appreciating the technique. I didn't write it for any award, though. I wrote it entirely for the pleasure of writing.......Hahahahaha...Rofl...
Sorry, couldn't help it
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Rotfl!
Too good. Inimitably Kirin@Mani! -
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Just now looked up 'inimitably'. Thank you very much
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A pleasure...
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Hahah! I loved it =) This was very creative and original, and you made wonderful use of the limiting words =) Thanks for entering!
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Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. May you get some great entries in the contest!!
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brill!
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