Mummy I gots a booboo

I was running, getting faster, faster, and faster some more until I kinda tripped and fell... The E...

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lol yer ok for a contest...

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    September 24, 2008

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    This was creative! Very interesting!

    Great luck in the contest and with all of your writing!

    Rian


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 24, 2008

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    haha, I love the title, it ties in soo well. it's sooo random, i love it!! lol, great job, keep it up =DD

    -Dani


  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Thanks for entering =) And wow... you got exactly .3 of a word! ~claps~ Cute story, too, gives a nice little image =)