Gone

Memories always fade.1

They fly away as one and love is burnt at Heaven's door, offerings of tr-2

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YAY! For a competition...write a story just using 17.3 words!!! haha XP
(chops end word off with a fish)

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  • Thorn-on-the-Rose silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    aww, this is cute, it seems to me like a letter someone stopped writting, but i like it, it's kinda sad, good job =DD

    -Dani


  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    I like this =) It's deep, interesting, and thought provoking. Such an interesting use of a limiting number of words... Thanks much for entering =)

    (Does anyone else see the irony in the comments being longer than the stories themselves?)

    ~Aura ♥