Four (minus One)

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Would 3 words do? I could add something at the start, but it seemed better to me in this state

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• 4 little words by Dassy. 175 points, ended September 19, 2008, 16 entries
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  Tiger-Lily
  October 9, 2008
  
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  Ir-regardless? Double-negative. Don't you mean regardless? As in, not caring about anything, right?
  
  I like this. Very true. Pity eBay doesn't sell this. And I thought they said they had everything...but time!
  
  -HT
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  Reaver
  September 24, 2008
  
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  only three words, but they are very powerful. time is eveyrone's ememy in the end...there is just never enough! great job!
  
  Rian
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  Thorn-on-the-Rose
  September 24, 2008
  
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  aww, it's kinda cute and sad =(( I like it!! great job!! your words are sooo deep and i love them =)) goo job =DD
  
  -Dani
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  Prodigious.Mirth
  September 19, 2008
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  Truth
  simple
  sweet
  
  good luck
  well done
  
  Blair ~

  
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  Dassy
  September 18, 2008
  
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  lol its fine
  i guess i should actually change the rules to 4 words and under shouldnt i?
  oh welps.
  Good job!