words of wisdom

beauty breathes within darkness.

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  • Poopa Thug
    September 28

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    I spent a a minute or 2 pondering this before I even came upon a coherent meaning. So here is my take on it: beauty is swarmed when it is seen in the light, but in darkness it is unnoticed and gets some breathing room. Anyway thats the only sense I could get.


  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Ohh, verry nice! I loved the irony in this. Poetic, as Durian says.

    -HT


  • Reaver Greeters member
    September 24, 2008

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    Very poetic actually. One of those things that makes a person stop and think! Great job on winning the gold! Great work!
    Rian


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 24, 2008

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    So true!! haha, those words came to me before I even read the comment below me. But I love these words, they're amazing!! good job =DD

    -Dani


  • Dassy
    September 18, 2008
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    So true! I love it!


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 18, 2008

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    That was equisite.
    good luck with the contest...

    Blair

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