we are ment to be

when i saw you look at me i knew we were ment to be 1

i knew that you liked me .2

you were hot and i was not but we were ment to be 3

i waited seven weeks to see you . 4

and i knew we were ment to be . 5

i loved you and hoped you loved me .6

i asked you out on a date you said great .7

i wated a week and you asked me out on another date .8

you are my best friend mate.

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when i saw you look at me i knew we were ment to be
i knew that you liked me .
you were hot and i was not but we were ment to be  
i waited seven weeks to see you .
and i knew we were ment to be .
i loved you and hoped you loved me .
i asked you out on a date you said great .
i wated a week and you asked me out on another date  .
you are my best friend mate.

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    Lovely..
    a few errors like capitalization of (I) ect but over all I felt that this was a heartfelt poem with lots of love and honesty ^.^

    ♣ Blake