you promised your love

you promised your love

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  • Tiger-Lily
    October 9, 2008

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    I liked this. It's like the summary of most guys' words. They always "promise"

    Pity, huh? I liked this. Very woeful.

    -HT


  • Reaver Greeters member
    September 24, 2008

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    So many do and many also fail to actuall hold true on that promise....great work!

    Loved this
    Rian


    • Alyana
      September 24, 2008
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      unfortunately true,
      thanks
      your profile pic is so cool D


  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 24, 2008

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    Hmm, I like it, it has multiple meanings, it could be broken heartedness, or happy love, personally, I think the former fits better, it's soo deep !! good job =DD

    -Dani


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 19, 2008

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    And what a fucking shame if that promise is broken.
    though in life it will be ...over and over...

    well done
    good luck

    Blair !


    • Alyana
      September 21, 2008
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      yeah, it is a shame, almost a sin, but theres always someone who picks you back up again.
      and thanks


  • Dassy
    September 18, 2008
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    lol good job. yours is what I am looking for in this contest.

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