Blurb The Loss of Reason

Three best friends 17 and 18 years of age, and living in a house together. Now lets twist it up even more, each of them has their partner living with them as well, one's gay, one's bi, and one's straight. Six teenagers living under one roof, this can't turn out too well.

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Just a note this story it told from the point of view of each of the six characters, it's not finished but it is in progress Titled The Loss of Reason check it out....
Lauren

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  • Tiger-Lily
    October 17, 2008

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    Misuse of commas. I'm sorry, technically this is more than three sentences. Using commas instead of periods will not change that fact.

    However, this is a great summary and definite;ly appealing. XD

    Thanks for entering,

    xx HT xx

  • Thorn-on-the-Rose
    September 24, 2008

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    oh, sounds like highscool drama.... except in a house... well it's sounds very cool!!I'd like to read more =DDD

    -Dani

  • Stryke Greeters member
    September 24, 2008

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    Sounds like you thought it out completely! Great work on this. Luck with the contest!

    Rian

  • Eresipel
    September 18, 2008
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    Sounds interesting...