Forever Stuck

Like a fly stuck on a spiderweb,1

That's how my life is.2

Taking the venom each day,3

But I'm still trying to stay.4

I struggle and fight and try to break free,5

And yet I know there's no escape for me.6

My vision slowly slipping away,7

My mind and soul no longer at bay.8

You've sucked the life out of me, 9

And I know I should let it be.10

For I know there's no use anymore,11

You held me down when I wanted to soar.12

You took my pride and made me hide,13

You stole everything and gave back nothing.14

And now I see I'm just a fly struggling to be free.15

I'm trying to be what you want me to be,16

But deep inside I can only be me.

Author notes

Hey guys. I wrote this after I got in a big fight with my dad. Let me know what you think.

-Snow

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  • Luis-senpai
    September 18, 2008
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    is good... thats y i never talk with my parents or to any1 xD good poem


  • BetterThanDrugs
    September 18, 2008

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    sounds like me a month or so ago with my mom.... love it......it's very good and emotional...the imagery is amazing tooo....kudos.....