Blackened Vails( Veals, whatever)

Young Jade didn't live very long. She always wore a color of black or grey. Her funeral was on December 13th. She died at the age of 16...Sadly, in a car accident.....She should've listened to her parents, if only, she wasn't so angry with them....1

"Jade!! Get your ass up the bus is going to leaveeeee!!!"2

"Whatever mom...." --Yawn--3

Jade groggily pushed the covers to the end of her bed. She stood up and looked around her room, which was covered in old 80's rock band posters. She looked at the clock and struggled to read what time it was. 8:15.4

-DAMN I'M GOING TO BE LATE!!!!-5

Jade went into her dresser and pulled out her favorite outfit. Elephant pants, and a black t-shirt.6

Her hair lay in curls just below her shoulders. The tips happened to be a faded purple color. Oh how her mom disliked her hair. 7

She ran past her mom in the hallway and into the bathroom to brush her hair and her teeth.8

Her little brother, Davey, was poking her in the stomach when she came out asking," JAADDDEEEEE!!! WANNA' PLAY?!!?!!" 9

"No Damnit I'ma' be late..."10

"Awww you're so mean. You big oompa-loompa."11

"Whatever"12

Jade walked down the street towards her school and saw that she had JUST missed the bus. "Shit." She said as began to walk faster. 13

-I can't be late today. I have to see him. He's going to get it.-she thought to herself as she felt a raindrop on her forehead.14

"Oh great. God, you give me an annoying little brother, a dip-shit for a mother, and no father, and you can't even let it stop raining when I miss the bus? What did I ever do to you."15

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She sat down at her desk in homeroom, just seconds before the bell rang. Her hair was soaked, along with her clothes and her books. Unfortunately she forgot her bookbag as well. A couple of the "plastics" ( as she liked to call them ) were snickering and pointing at her. This didn't bother her because she was used to it. 17

Her homeroom teacher lifted up some envelopes. "Here are your report cards. They will be mailed out today, and hopefully, get to your house today or tomorrow."18

-Great. Now I'm grounded for even longer-She thought again. 19

Jade looked over to her left and saw someone coming towards her. It was Stacy.....The one Michael dumped her for.20

" Do you like, know that your hair is like, a total mess? And like, pants have like, a hole in the bottom of them."21

"No shit miss perfect."22

"Well! I was just TRYING to give you some fashion advice. You ingrate!"23

"I don't need your Petty advice. And second of all, do you even know what an ingrate is? I'm sure you don't and further more, can you even like, SPELL IT?!"Jade said trying to mock her voice.24

Stacy's friend Michelle said," Stop antagonizing her."25

"Can YOU spell that?"26

The bell rang for first period.27

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  • X-ForsakenAngel-X
    July 3, 2005
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    Wow i didntknow that you wrote a story....It was good.gotta read the rest

  • LadyLover
    March 18, 2005
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    Morbid Beauty Queen!

    Keep goint. This is good. I liked how you put in the whole 'convo with god" Coco Forever and 10 DayS!!