my name is maximillion. i am not inside the cost-coaster yet, but the finances have me drained like a crane just lifted my brain out of my cranium. millenium, calcium makes you forget to run when the sun comes out. when it goes back down you can move a mountain. all the earplugs made of cotton. rotten in the cell like the pills that they fell for. i was knocking on a door, for a whole half an hour, but then i realized i'm sitting down, rocking in the shower. shivering because the water is cold, but it's newer than the big bang. quivering as i slowly get old, bracing myself from the pain. chain gang is a comin to fix the railroads. chain gang is a comin to fix and mend the railroads. they're neatly trotting over to my girlfriend's house, to get the chain-gang gang-bang before they come to fix the railroads. and here i am all alone. wondering why all the flys all glide directly into my eyeballs. warsaw. forget you're tall, and start thinking like an idiot grave warmer, transformer. it's unsettling to hear you breathe like my screaming knees, in vain, always at the mall on time to catch them when they fell for the pills again, down the hill. cheap thrills, overused rhymes? music is done for. i ask, HOW MANY MORE TIMES?
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the irony and apparent symbolism in this piece are beyond belief. it would make perfect sense, if only...
who is this masked man?
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very cute and interesting. I haven't thought of Andy Kaufman in a long time.
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I vote... this should be a rhap... becuase that would be fucking awesome... like the day they put peanut butter and jelly in the same jar...kind of along that caliber...
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umm it sounds very odd. I'm not sure but it must be some druggie with strange problems that even my uncle (who does more drugs then Metallica) doesn't have...
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I have no earthly idea who this is by anme but it sounds like a drug junkie ...haluciantions.....(I don't know if I spelt that right opps)...but hey that's just what it sound like to me...maybe it's because of the line "fell for the pills again"....interesting though to say the least
Lauren
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I cannot begin to guess who the masked man is! I have a feeling you have given lots of clues throughout, though. Interesting piece of work!
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Interesting. Sounds like a good rap. I'm guessing you went for the lowercase all around on purpose, for style points. You did get cotton as cotten, and breath as breathe, I think, although you might have meant breath. Kinda hard to tell.
I like the sudden "warsaw" in there. Like, what? Oh, my, all the things warsaw might mean. Does it mean any of them?
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