contest entry:Digital F33r

Character Name: Digital F33ar1

Physical Appearance-2

Gender:Male3

Age:214

Height:5"65

Weight:125lbs.6

Hair:black7

Eyes:blue8

Distinguishing Marks:Scar across his right eye9

Distinguishing Mannerisms: Politeness? 10

Describe the character's appearance in a brief paragraph:11

Background-12

Birth date:June/23/198713

Birthplace:Japan14

Ethnic origin:Japanese15

Family members: Does not know, he's been adopted 16

Personality-17

In one word:Nice18

First impression:Bossy19

Gets angry at:Almost everything20

Laughs at:nothing21

Cries at:nothing22

Regrets:Killing his master23

Vulnerability:his memory24

Prejudices:???25

Fears:nothing26

Other details-27

Hobbies:Ninja training,Fishing28

Skills:assassination and missions29

Smells:???30

Favorite color:Blue31

Favorite food:Lasagna32

Favorite beverage:Iced tea 33

Favorite music:none34

Favorite clothing:Ninja outfit35

Brownie Points:36

What complications arise from this character?37

He is very complicated, always thinks twice, gets very distracted in his thoughts.38

A contest entry

• Create a Character! by Adelaide Blood. 175 points, ended October 12, 2008, 29 entries
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• Adelaide Blood
  September 17, 2008
  
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  Some issues...

  What kinda name is Digital F33ar1?
  Smells is just his scent; what he smells like
  Prejudices are just people he doesn't quite like, like for some people they hate jocks and cheerleaders, the more popular people look at goths and emos like they are worth less than dirt. Its kinda like that... Some people have prejudice against African heritage, some people are against Pagans. It is that sorta thing. Prejudices are based off of stereotypes, appearance/social status, and physical/mental health.
  Also... ninjas are very unrealistic, and I wanted a present tense human character, so even if he is human, it seems to lack present tense, because ninjas are from 15th century feudal Japan...
  You also didn't seem like you put all that much effort and thought into this, by using less description and skipping through a lot of it...
  Thank you however for the entry! ^^