THE MURDER GRAM 1
“Awakening” 2
TEASER 3
FADE IN:4
EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING - MORNING5
Carissa Sanchez-Pierre walks out of her apartment. She heads towards a small car. She opens the car’s door. 6
INT. CAR - MORNING7
CARISSA sits in the driver’s seat, places both hands on the steering wheel and closes her eyes. She takes a deep breath, exhales, and then opens her eyes. She adjusts the seat, the rearview and side mirrors, then pulls the seat belt over her and SNAPS it over her swollen stomach. She reaches in to her purse, on the passenger seat, and retrieves a cellular phone. She begins to dial a number, and then presses the end button. She stares at the phone and then tosses it onto the seat beside the purse. 8
EXT. CARISSA’S APARTMENT - SIDE STREET - CONTINUOUS9
Carissa pulls the car out onto a small side street in front of her apartment. 10
EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET - MORNING11
A large SUV is traveling at a high rate of speed. 12
INT. SUV - CONTINUOUS13
The DRIVER has one hand on the steering wheel, and with the other hand, he is changing the radio stations on the vehicle’s stereo. 14
EXT. SIDE STREET - MORNING15
We see the car that Carissa is driving, traveling on the side street. She merges into a wider one-way residential street. 16
INT. CARISSA’S CAR - CONTINUOUS17
Carissa looks over at the phone. She reaches over and picks up the phone. She dials a number and places the phone to her ear. 18
CARISSA19
(annoyed, into receiver)20
Where are you?21
(listens)22
What? You’re where? Haiti?23
Carissa’s eyes widen. She has a look of disbelief on her face. 24
CARISSA (CONT’D)25
Are you freaking crazy, Claude? You knew we had this appointment. 26
EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET - MORNING27
The SUV is barreling down the empty street. MUSIC is blaring through the windows. The DRIVER is bobbing his head to the music and singing aloud. 28
INT. CARISSA’S CAR - MORNING29
Carissa is still on the phone. She isn’t paying attention to the speed she is traveling or to her outside surroundings. From inside the car, a traffic signal can be seen two blocks up ahead. The light is green. The car zooms toward the traffic signal. The light changes to yellow. 30
CARISSA31
(angry, screaming into the receiver)32
I need your ass, HERE! What could be more important than your pregnant wife? 33
EXT. ONE-WAY RESIDENTIAL STREET - CONTINUOUS34
Carissa’s car is rapidly approaching the traffic signal. She doesn’t notice that it has changed from yellow to red. 35
INT. CARISSA’S CAR - MORNING36
Carissa glances up and realizes that the traffic light is red. She screams as she drops the phone. Simultaneously, she grabs the steering wheel with both hands and quickly slams on the brakes. The tires SCREECH. 37
EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET - CONTINUOUS38
The DRIVER of the SUV is pressing buttons on the stereo. He raises his head and looks out onto the street. His eyes widen and his mouth opens. He inhales audibly. 39
EXT. INTERSECTION - SECONDS LATER40
The SUV crashes into the drivers side of Carissa’s car. The driver of the SUV slams through the windshield. His hips and torso protrude from the window. The rest of his body hangs limply onto the dash board. As blood cascades from his stomach and mouth, he is not breathing. The MUSIC from the SUV’s stereo is still BLASTING. 41
INT. CARISSA’S CAR - CONTINUOUS42
The seat belt has Carissa strapped into the driver’s seat, but her body is leaning grotesquely towards the passenger seat. Her face is bleeding and covered with lacerations from the explosion of the window. As she slumps in the seat, we 43
PULL BACK44
DISSOLVE TO:45
BLACK SCREEN 46
here we hold for a beat. We hear the SOUNDS of a hospital equipment: CLICKING, WHIRRING, BEEPING, people moving hastily, voices shouting orders, AD LIBS, this goes on for several seconds...47
VOICE #148
I’ve got two heart beats... but one’s really weak.49
VOICE #250
It’s twins!51
We hear more background SOUNDS, people working hurriedly, machinery. 52
VOICE #353
Dammit... She’s bleeding internally. I can’t stop it. 54
More SOUNDS of hurried action, labored BREATHING.55
We hear the long MONOTONE BEEP of the electrocardiograph, and then, we hear the loud SCREAM of a newborn baby, one baby, as we56
FADE OUT.57
END TEASER58
ACT ONE59
FADE IN:60
EXT. SANCHEZ’S HOUSE - EARLY MORNING61
SUPERIMPOSE:62
“7 YEARS LATER”63
A cat PASSES in front of the house.64
INT. SANCHEZ’S HOUSE - BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS65
THE CAMERA PANS THE ROOM, 66
the room is decorated in an explosion of pink and white. There are several photographs of Carissa on top of a bureau. In one of the pictures, Carissa is pregnant and kissing an attractive black man. There are two beds in the room. One bed is unoccupied. Lying on the other bed is a YOUNG GIRL. She is asleep, but her sleep seems to be turbulent. She appears agitated. She moans and whimpers, as she tosses about the bed. 67
A SMALL BOY68
walks into the FRAME.69
He and the YOUNG GIRL share a close resemblance. He stands over the YOUNG GIRL and watches her as she sleeps. Appearing to be concerned about her uneasiness, he gently extends his hand, as if, to comfort her. The bedroom door opens. 70
THE SMALL BOY 71
looks up at opening door.72
A WOMAN quietly enters the room, leaving the door open behind her. She is an older, stockier version of Carissa. 73
THE WOMAN74
crosses to the YOUNG GIRL’s bed. 75
THE WOMAN76
pulls the covers up around the YOUNG GIRL and strokes her hair. The YOUNG GIRL has stopped writhing. She is no longer whimpering. 77
THE WOMAN78
kneels next to the bed. She folds her hands together, closes her eyes, and issues a silent prayer. 79
THE SMALL BOY80
places his hands on the WOMAN’s shoulders. 81
CLOSEUP - WOMAN’s face as she prays. 82
WOMAN83
Amen.84
THE WOMAN makes the sign of the cross over her face.85
PULL BACK86
The WOMAN gingerly stands. 87
She straightens her clothes, and then bends forward to kiss the YOUNG GIRL on the forehead. The SMALL BOY is no longer at her back. She exits the room looking back at the YOUNG GIRL once more. 88
THE CAMERA PANS THE ROOM, 89
the SMALL BOY is no where in the room. 90
INT. SANCHEZ’S HOUSE - KITCHEN NOOK - MORNING91
A MAN and the WOMAN sit at the kitchen table. 92
BENITA (WOMAN)93
I don’t know. I think we should get her some professional help.94
Benita stands and starts to remove dishes and silverware off the table. 95
CARLOS (MAN)96
No, Nita. That’s not what she needs. 97
Benita has started washing the few dishes.98
BENITA99
Carlos, she NEEDS help. She has been this way since she was a baby and now it’s gotten worse. 100
CARLOS101
I know. But we tried that. I will not put her through that again. 102
Benita sits down. She looks stoically at her husband.103
BENITA104
Carlos... We took her to Reverend Ortiz. That’s not the type of professional I’m talking about.105
CARLOS106
You know the church has always been a major part of our lives. It was the best thing for our family.107
BENITA108
You may be right. But was it the best thing for Cassie? 109
Carlos looks at his wife, Benita, and then down at the table. 110
CARLOS111
I don’t know, honey. I just don’t know.112
EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL PLAYGROUND - AFTERNOON113
Children run and shout all over the playground in various modes of play. THE YOUNG GIRL sits alone on the ground, under a tree. A TEACHER approaches her. 114
TEACHER115
Cassie, are you okay today?116
The YOUNG GIRL doesn’t acknowledge the teacher’s presence. She sits and stares out at the other children. 117
TEACHER (CONT’D)118
Cassie?119
The YOUNG GIRL, startled, jerks her head in the direction of the teacher. There are tears cascading down her cheeks. 120
TEACHER (CONT’D)121
Cassie, why are you crying? Is something the matter? 122
CASSIE (YOUNG GIRL)123
I wanna go home. 124
The teacher sits on the ground next to Cassie. She tries to soothe her by smoothing back her hair. 125
TEACHER126
Baby, did someone hurt you? Why do you want to go home? 127
With tears in her eyes, Cassie looks directly at the Teacher. 128
CASSIE129
You won’t believe me.130
The teacher takes Cassie’s hand in hers.131
TEACHER132
Sweety, I’ll believe you. What makes you think I wont believe you? 133
CASSIE134
No one does. Everyone thinks I’m crazy. 135
TEACHER136
You’re not crazy. No one thinks that, Cassie. 137
The teacher pulls Cassie onto her lap and continues to stroke her hair. 138
TEACHER139
Tell me what’s wrong, baby.140
Cassie hesitates, then she leans back onto the teacher. 141
CASSIE142
Timothy is glowing. 143
TEACHER144
What? 145
CASSIE146
Timothy Stewart is glowing. That means he’s gonna die.147
CLOSEUP on TEACHER148
INT. SANCHEZ’S HOUSE - KITCHEN NOOK149
CLOSEUP OF TELEPHONE HANGING ON KITCHEN WALL150
TELEPHONE RINGING151
PULL BACK to152
Benita entering the kitchen and lifting the receiver to her ear.153
BENITA154
Hello?155
(listens)156
Yes?157
Benita closes her eyes. Sadness washes over her face. 158
EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - LATER159
Carlos and Benita are walking to the School parking lot with a somber Cassie in tow. The school buses are pulling in front of the school. Children run around in a melee as teachers try to instill order to the end of the school day. 160
One of the children breaks free of the orderly regime of the teachers. HE runs towards the buses to be the first aboard. As he reaches the curb he stumbles and falls onto the asphalt. The rear wheel of the last arriving bus, crushes the little boy. 161
TEACHER162
TIMMY!163
SUPERIMPOSE:164
“16 YEARS LATER”165
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT166
A YOUNG MAN, 30 something, is sitting on a sofa, leaning back. A YOUNG WOMAN, 20 something, is lying on the sofa with her head on his thigh. 167
YOUNG MAN (ALEX)168
So, after little Jimmy died, you thought you had this... special power? 169
The YOUNG WOMAN rolls her eyes.170
YOUNG WOMAN (CASSIE)171
Timmy.172
ALEX173
What?174
CASSIE175
His name was Timmy... And It’s not a special power. 176
ALEX177
Well, you claim you can see these auras around people. That’s not normal. So, it’s a special power to me.178
CASSIE179
I claim? 180
ALEX181
Well... 182
Cassie adjusts her position and looks Alex in the face.183
CASSIE184
Whatever, Alex. Let’s talk about something else.185
ALEX186
No. I wanna talk about this. I’m trying to understand.187
CASSIE188
Oh, please.189
Cassie stands and walks OFF SCREEN into the kitchen.190
ALEX191
Aw, come on.192
CASSIE (O.S.)193
Do you want anything to drink?194
ALEX195
No, I’m good.196
Alex sits up and straightens the pillows on the sofa. He situates himself so that he is looking directly at the entrance to the kitchen. His back ramrod straight. Cassie enters the room carrying a soft drink. She stops and places her free hand on her hip. 197
CASSIE198
What are you doing?199
ALEX200
Tell me what my aura looks like.201
Cassie rolls her eyes. She walks into the room. She places her drink on a coaster on a table that separates the chair and sofa. She drops down into a chair opposite the sofa. 202
ALEX (CONT’D)203
Come on, Cassie, tell me. 204
CASSIE205
I should’ve never told you anything.206
ALEX207
Oh, baby don’t be that way. I was just having fun with you.208
CASSIE209
That’s just it, Alex. It’s not funny to me. 210
Alex stands. He walks over to Cassie, sits on her lap, and brushes her hair away from her face. 211
ALEX212
I’m sorry. 213
He kisses her several times, gently on her forehead. Cassie closes her eyes. 214
He lifts her chin up. Her eyes are still closed. He leans in close to her, his lips millimeters from hers.215
ALEX (CONT’D)216
Forgive me?217
She opens her eyes. 218
CASSIE219
Always.220
They kiss passionately and, then, Alex stands and lifts Cassie into his arms. He carries her through the living room, off camera into the bedroom. 221
The camera pans the living room and we see a YOUNG MAN, who closely resembles Cassie, standing near the sofa. He is looking in the direction where Alex and Cassie just entered. He has a look of concern on his face. 222
DISSOLVE TO:223
INT. APARTMENT - BEDROOM - EARLY MORNING224
Alex and Cassie are in bed, asleep. Cassie shifts in her sleep and starts to awaken. She notices the YOUNG MAN standing at the foot of the bed staring at her. Cassie sits up in the bed, holding the sheet to her breasts. 225
CASSIE 226
(she mouthed the word)227
What?228
The YOUNG MAN says nothing. He responds by raising his arm and pointing directly at Alex. Cassie looks over at Alex, briefly, and the then looks back at the YOUNG MAN. 229
CASSIE (CONT’D)230
(mouthing the words)231
What’s wrong, Casey? What?232
CASEY (YOUNG MAN), with his arm still raised, shakes his head slowly from side to side. Cassie opens her mouth to reply once more, but is interrupted by 233
ANGLE ON: Nightstand, we see two electronic devices that resemble cellular phones. Both devices light up and start VIBRATING simultaneously. 234
Cassie reaches over and retrieves one of the devices. She looks at the lighted screen and then back to Casey. Casey is no longer in the room. She then looks at Alex and begins to shake him awake. 235
CASSIE (CONT’D)236
(holding the device)237
Get dressed. We’ve got an assignment.238
DISSOLVE TO:239
EXT. ROOF OF HIGH RISE BUILDING - LONGSHOT - LATER240
We see SIX PEOPLE in black combat fatigues and black masks, carrying an assortment of weapons, entering the bay doors of a helicopter. 241
INT. HELICOPTER - CONTINUOUS242
The SIX PEOPLE sit three to a side inside the rear of the helicopter. One of the SIX points over at another of the SIX and then motions towards their shoulder. A lock of hair is protruding from the mask onto their shoulder. The other removes the mask and we see that it is Cassie. She repositions her hair and replaces the mask. 243
DISSOLVE TO:244
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Comments
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I enjoyed this a lot, Thank you for sharing it with me. It does not seem like it is finished is it? Just seems so cut off and like I want to know more, what happens from here lol Good stuff.


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This is really good!! So her dead twin is like her guardian angel? This is a great concept. When this goes to the movies....can I be Cassie? LOL!!!!!


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Hmm I love your woman characters...they are very strongwilled...so now it's Cassie's turn to stun me hehe...Well she did very good...an assassin
I love how it started with so much action...something to anticipate on the next episode? and how the setting shifted to the hospital and then the flashback of her childhood thenback to present.
I really like Cassie's and Alex conversation...and hmm Alex is a good listener...I mean his interest in her aura...I could almost imagine the sketches on this...of course, the bonus...the steamy scene...hmm how about visual skeches on that part lol j/k.
and lastly, I could just smile on the soft drink, you know hehe.


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This would be a good movie!
Emotional work in this Tom! I can't wait to see the rest of this story. I enjoyed what you shared...THANKS!!




