"People do better living together...and rent for one is expensive." 1
That's the philosophy of the smattering of young adults that went in on the mess of a duplex. What they never guessed is that, more than finding themselves with others, they aren't alone - whether they like it or not.
Author notes
Here's a link to the story on my creative writing site:
http://www.freewebs.com/wannabewarriorstories/heping.htm
(It's on sw, but in smaller pieces.)
A contest entry
- One-Liner Intrigue by Tiger-Lily.
190 points, ended November 22, 41 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I didn't fully understand this but I don't know what ping means either and what exactly it has to do with the meaning...but it does sound unique to say the least.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks! "He ping" is, unless my friends and online dictionaries were wrong (please tell me if they were wrong) either the Chinese or Japanese word for hope. It makes sense within the context of the story.
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Aha! I got it now. Thank you so much for telling me. Might wanna add that in your notes for people like me that didn't know
It does make perfect since now! You're right that it does go with the context of the story
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Ooooh, I wanna read this!!It sounds awesome!! Brilliant summary/blurb thingy here!!
Thanks for entering, and I'll be sure to check this out!
-HT -
Ooooh, I wanna read this!!It sounds awesome!! Brilliant summary/blurb thingy here!!
Thanks for entering, and I'll be sure to check this out!
-HT
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cool. sounbds interesting, though I'm a little lost. Maybe I'll check it out. good job =DDD
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I wonder what the story is about? i didnt' catch that from reading this. It was good though for a thinker type thing. Great job.
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Advantage--a very compelling introduction. Disadvantage--it offers no clue as to what sort of story this actually is.
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