Name: Jack Johnson1
Gender: Male2
Age: 223
Height: 1.76 m4
Weight: 75kg5
Hair: brown, straight and longish6
Eyes: dark green7
Distinguishing marks: small scar on the back of left hand8
Distinguishing mannerisms: seldom talks, hunches shoulders all the time9
A paragragh of his physical appearance:10
Jack had a mop of dark hair that covered his face like a blanket. He had large dark green eyes, that appeared to be blue sometimes. His body was long and thin like a string bean, and the way he hunched his shoulders accentuated that. 11
Background12
English and North American.13
Birthdate: 13th September, 1986.14
Ethnic origin: Christian, Anglican15
Family members: father and sister16
Word for personality: complex17
First impression: sad and overly shy18
Gets angry at: nosy people, his mistakes19
Laughs at: his in-your-face sister, silly remarks20
Cries at: sick people21
Regrets: not livin up to his father's expectations22
Vulnerability: meeting new people and questions about his dead mother23
Prejudices:hates reporters, sporty people24
Fears: violence25
Most valued possession:26
Mothers necklace because his father burned her other stuff when she died27
Pressing need: to paint takes away his anger28
Pressing desire: to have a friend that understands him29
Other goals: to be a popular painter, to make his father happy30
Responsibilities: looking after his sister because she is so wild31
Sense of humour: likes to laugh about silly people in his past32
Other positive personality traits: a good listener, understands problems33
Negative Personality traits: doesn't like to interact with many people34
Hobbies: painting, walking35
Skills: painting, reading and good listening36
Smells: vanilla, puppy smell37
Favourite colour: blue38
Favourite food: apple pie39
Favourite beverage: lemonade40
Favourite music: chopin41
Favourite clothes: warm jackets, t shirts and jeans42
His home: small apartment, dimly lit with bedroom,kitchen, lounge and studio43
Brownie Points: visits shelter every week44
What complications arise from this character: depression and vulnerability45
A contest entry
- Create a Character! by Adelaide Blood.
175 points, ended October 12, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good entry!
I just read like... five entries that weren't exactly what I was looking for, so thanks for a valid entry that shows you actually read the rules! ^^ Well done, thanks for the entry!


