If I could see I would fall,
Take the tears take them all,
I can't see you walk away,
I can feel the feelings disintegrate,1
Close my eyes and hope to see,
All that you gave to me,
Push away the light of day,
Open my eyes and hear that you'll stay,2
When love is broken sorrow forms,
Breaks your heart down destroys all,
Say your sorry take it back,
Feel I'm broken heart attack,3
Close my eyes and hope to see,
All that you have taken from me,
Take the dark inside of me,
Feel the love disappear distantly,4
I dreamed you asked for me back,
Happiness in me take the slack,
Then I woke up in the cold,
The dream unreal darkness reborn,5
Close my eyes and hope to see,
That you still love me,
Call my name and say to me,
That you care and still love me. 6
Author notes
Written just after a major change occurred in my life a few weeks ago, this was something that was able to help me cope at the time.
A contest entry
- Depression by Reaver.
260 points, ended September 24, 2008, 17 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great work.
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THis was wonderful! I enjoyed reading and thank you for entering my contest!
Rian -
Beautifully sad.
Nicely written, nice flow.
i liked it.
cheers
Hunter~
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