Physical Appearances-2 Gender:male3 Age:174 Height:5'105 Weight:1256 Hair:black7 Eyes: grey, sometimes grey-green, sometimes grey-blue8 Distinguishing Marks:... none physically. he has an awesome personality though^_^ He has a scar from at one point when he had surgery.9 Distinguishing Mannerisms:serious, uses common sense. very quiet, hates attention, not one to be notice when you walk in a room (even if it's empty) huge genius, but few know it, loner, but when he gets friends he is very loyal and always there for them.10 Describe the character's appearance in a brief paragraph:he usually stands or sits in back courner of a room, just sort of thinking. His eyes are deep and even though he's shy, when he's talking to someone he looks them in the eye.11
Background-
Birth date:August 1712 Birthplace:Back of parent's old beaten up car.
Ethnic origin:Many things, mainly Italian.
Family members:Mom (Maple Coffin) Dad (John Coffin) Sister (Aliza Coffin)13
Personality-
In one word: dark
First impression: anti-social
Gets angry at: belittlement
Laughs at: irony
Cries at: ... he cries when his friend, Dylin's dad dies. (I'll explain in a bit)
Regrets: any act of violence that he ever commita (at all)
Vulnerability: fighting (not physical... like arguments)
Prejudices: none
Fears: attracting to much attention to himslf; someone really betraying his trust (they'd have to do somthing pretty bad); someone he loves dieing.
Most valued possession (and why)
ossesions, to him, are unimportant.Pressing need: to stay out of the way of others14 Pressing desire: tobe wanted
Other goals:to be able to grow up and live a normal life, and to prove to his parents that he is more then a waste of flesh.
Responsibilities:stay out of parents way, take care of sister (somtimes) get idiot friends out of messes.
Sense of humor:really really clever jokes that someone doesn't get until they wake up in the night cracking up.
Other positive personality traits:very sesible, and kins. When he falls in love she is his one and only (he learns a language for her) loyal, smart, patiant, deep wise.
Other negative personality traits (character flaws):quiet, serious, sometimes too serious, relys on few things but completely relys on those things.15
Other details-
Hobbies: plays gutair (found in junk yard, fixed it up) Likes to do math and science, he reads, and somtimes writes, mainly poetry, but occasionally a short story he plays chess and hes really really really really good at all those hings an he has been since a young age.
Skills: (look at hobbie) He can really get into and understand the mind of pretty much nyone.
Smells: what does he smell like? I don't know. What smell does he like?...hamburger
Favorite color: Blue
Favorite food: chinese (he hates pizza)
Favorite beverage: milk
Favorite music: any kind
Favorite clothing: he doesn't have a favorite clothing.... he usually wears his dads old shirts and a pair of pants that he has owned for years... he doesn't care.
Describe this character's home:I'll take this as his past, ^_^16 When he was born, he prevented his parents from investing somthing that would have eventually made them rich, because of this he is hated severly by them.he spends most of his young life living in the basement of their house while his parents scream at one another upstairs at all hours.when he does show his face, then they stop yelling at one another and start yelling at him. one thing that has always bugged him is that the one thing they have ever agreed on is how horrible and useless he is and how he is a burden to everyone and everything. His friend, Dylin's dad, who lives across the street from him is the one adult figure that has ever been there for him. when his sister is born, he moves up to the laundry room, and she is adored and loved by his parents. but still, on the whole, his home is a trash pit full of screaming angry parents who hates his guts.17
Brownie Points:
What complications arise from this character?loads of complications, for one, he's smarter then enyone else in the world, holding an IQ of around 200. He has spent most of his life unhappy and alone and the one adult who has been there for him dies.18
because *sob* I jsut can't. But I do have a whole series planned for him and his three friends, unfortunatly the genra (sp?) he is in is realistic fiction which is somthing I have tried and tried and tried to write but have always failed in. so take him now and love him and use him, my dear judge. If you have any questions then please ask, and if you do choose him and want to change somthing drastic in his personality or even past, please, from the kindness in you heart consult me. (I am not including his friends or love. I want you to tell me if you change his parents or sister.)
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