Character Name: Clement Amar Edward Jacques Charbonneau (Severin [the Dark]) 1
Physical Appearance-2
Gender: Male3
Age: 274
Height: 5"115
Weight: 196 Ilbs6
Hair: Long and dark7
Eyes: Pitch black eyes8
Distinguishing Marks: A long, red scar that crosses his face9
Distinguishing Mannerisms: Mysterious, swift, sneaky, graceful, handsome, morbid10
Describe the character's appearance in a brief paragraph: Severin is a handsome character with long, dark hair, pitch black eyes, and a pale face. His body is small and thin but as he matures and grows, he finds that there is some sort of build to his chest. When he was born, there was a long, red scar that crossed his face. It started just above his left eyebrow (if you were to be facing him) and slithered across his left eye, over his softly rounded nose, danced across his right cheek and ended at about his right earlobe. His parents were horrified by this and demanded that he have some sort of surgery. But in the end, they were not able to afford it and they would be taking the risk of damaging his face further.11
Background-12
Birth date: Semptember 1713
Birthplace: The Love Forest, where newly weds went as their honeymoon14
Ethnic origin: He is mostly French, but has some British in him, as well.15
Family members: His mother, Felice Didiane Amanda Jeanette Valentine, his father, Gwenael Rolande Jerome Clement Charbonneau, his older brother, Honore Guarin Damien Claude Charbonneau16
Personality-17
In one word: mysterious18
First impression: A quiet and sly dreamer. One who is knowledgable about many things but keeps it to himself.19
Gets angry at: His father, war, diversity of race, Morbidity (the Dark Lord)20
Laughs at: The face of death21
Cries at: His lover, Christelle, cannot be with him because he is going to battle22
Regrets: Not sticking up for himself when he was young23
Vulnerability: Christelle24
Prejudices: Unjust actions, pointless lawbreaking, pointless murder, pointless divorce, war25
Fears: Himself26
Most valued possession (and why): Christelle because he was given a gift by his witch mother at birth that at the sight of true love he will have Unbroken and Passionate Love27
Pressing need: To love Christelle more than any man ever had before28
Pressing desire: To bring peace between the worlds29
Other goals: To die honorably in battle and be respected by his fellow warriors30
Responsibilities: To defeat Morbidity and end the war31
Sense of humor: Dry32
Other positive personality traits: Polite to women, kind to the helpless, understanding33
Other negative personality traits (character flaws): impatient, sly, devious, decieving34
Other details-35
Hobbies: Justly punishing the criminals, training for battle, planning escape routes36
Skills: Sword fighting, just robbery, just murder37
Smells: Pine and roses38
Favorite color: Black39
Favorite food: Meat40
Favorite beverage: Cow's milk41
Favorite music: Soft, dark, sad songs42
Favorite clothing: Flexible, black long sleeved shirt and pants made of wolf skin, a black, silk cape, and his black, silk mask43
Describe this character's home: He has no home. He is a wanderer from world to world. His base is the Mirrored Sky, where everything that is upside down becomes right side up. His trainer and friend, Old Faithful, takes care of him while he works on his skill.44
A contest entry
- Create a Character! by Adelaide Blood.
175 points, ended October 12, 2008, 29 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
what were the weak spots?
Comments
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He doesn't seem to be human
and not everyone who is part of who he is is human... In fact, this doesn't seem at all to be a person in present times... Though if I ever were to write a fantasy story I spose I could use him... Thanks for the entry even if it wasn't quite what I was asking for... ^^

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oh he's totally human. he just lives in a fantasy land.
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