Driretan Smoke

Character Name: Driretan Smoke (a.k.a Dare)1

Physical Appearance-2

Gender:Male3

Age:184

Height:6'0"5

Weight:1406

Hair:Long Pale blue7

Eyes:A bright teal blue8

Distinguishing Marks: a long scar across his chest9

Distinguishing Mannerisms: Watchful and calm10

Describe the character's appearance in a brief paragraph: Dare is a young adult, with long pale blue hair accenting his bright teal eyes. He is an average height of 6 feet and weight on the light side the right weight for his size. Theres a long scar across his chest from when he was attacked when he was 15.11

Background-12

Birth date:January 01, 199013

Birthplace: Unknown14

Ethnic origin: Romanian and German15

Family members: None that he knows about16

Personality-17

In one word: Serious 18

First impression: A punk kid up to no good19

Gets angry at: Society20

Laughs at: Any sign of pain and any joke dealing with dumb people21

Cries at: When anything is totured that does not need to be22

Regrets: That he doesn't remember is family23

Vulnerability: Anything that could kill him. 24

Prejudices: Most things in society25

Fears: That the world will never learn of his existions and will kill itself before that day.26

Most valued possession (and why):His Dagger, because with out he probally would have died on the streets alone, beaten and hungry.27

Pressing need: To find out why this all happened to him and why he can't remember anything.28

Pressing desire: To be with the one that truly loves him29

Other goals: To find himself30

Responsibilities:To get through society with out killing anyone that doesn't deserve it.31

Sense of humor: yes32

Other positive personality traits: He wants to save society with out destroying it. He cares more for the people around him than is own self.33

Other negative personality traits (character flaws): He has major anger issues. Fights a lot and steals for his own pleasure34

Other details-35

Hobbies: Fighting, Stealing, hacking, sketching and looking out for his friends 36

Skills: Hacking, dagger fighting and fist fighting, drawing37

Job: Works at a local warehouse and a bar/club.38

Smells: Of sweet wild flowers mixed with musk trying to hide his odd natural smell39

Favorite color: Lime green40

Favorite food: Rice41

Favorite beverage: Green Tea42

Favorite music: Techno,Metal, Random, melodies43

Favorite clothing: Dark light shirts, jeans, and a hoodie or a jacket.44

Describe this character's home: Dare lives in a small one room apartment alone. His house is clean but a liven in feeling; he only there for short periods at a time. There are paintings and sketches around the apartment and random quotes or statments from one time or another. His friends occasionally stay but they know his rules and why his house is this way and never want to make him mad. The apartment is just out of town to be quite but not far enough from the people.45

Brownie Points:46

What complications arise from this character? Dare's want to help society yet his anger issues and stealing are bout to make any of those plans crash.

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  • amanda vampiress silver member
    October 16, 2008

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    Wow, this is very detailed and thorough! Dare comes off to me as the typical bad boy character, that has some what good intentions, but whos past is out to get him. I like him! You described him so well that I could almost picture him as if he was standing right beside me. You also chose a nice color or the hair and eyes, makes him unique and mysterious in a way. Good job!


  • Adelaide Blood
    September 16, 2008

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    Interesting Character

    Thanks for this entry, it seems you put some thought into it, and he sure will be fun to write about! ^^


  • Mel-the-Believer
    September 16, 2008

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    Oooh, Dare sounds like a really interesting character. I like him. Nicely reated. Good luck in this contest. God Bless!