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Character Name: Helena Elaine Garren2
Physical Appearance- 3
Gender: Female4
Age:165
Height:5'36
Weight:140 (Mostly Muscle)7
Hair:Brown8
Eyes:Green9
Distinguishing Marks: scar above her right eye, she got it from falling down the hill on her family's ranch.10
Distinguishing Mannerisms: Twirls her hair when she's nervous and taps her foot when angry.11
Describe the character's appearance in a brief paragraph:12
She has a Heart shaped face, she comes from Arabic descent on her fathers side and french from her mother's side. She always wears a gold bracelet to remind her of her mother. It consists of a half heart and half moon, both meaning love and serenity. 13
Background- Helena's father was Arabic, he came over from the states and married her mother. Helena has an odd look of the world and often finds herself drifting off into dreamland. Even in school. 14
Her father's family is filled with businessmen, while her mother's family is filled with ranchers. Her brother died when she was 6, he was four years older, Helena saw him murdered. It changed her forever. When her mother died soon after it only hardened her heart more towards her father.15
Birth date: 05/ 04/ 199316
Birthplace: (You Choose Birthplace)17
Ethnic origin: Arabic/ French18
Family members: Father, Stepmother and younger sister Rachel19
Personality- Kind but not very trusting of strangers20
In one word: 21
First impression: Energetic22
Gets angry at: She's actually very calm, it takes a lot to get her angry.23
Laughs at: very little, it's hard for her to find humor in something.24
Cries at: Family Meetings, her brothers death and her mothers illness25
Regrets: Falling in Love26
Vulnerability: Her friends, she seems to lose them so easily. 27
Prejudices: none28
Fears: heights29
Most valued possession (and why): Her mother's bracelet, her mother died shortly after her brother. 30
Pressing need: To handle her sword, though there is no need for it she still likes to study the craft. 31
Pressing desire: To find love again, true love32
Other goals: To travel the world33
Responsibilities: none 34
Sense of humor: She's had a hard life, it's difficult for her to laugh at anything35
Other positive personality traits: Selflessness, strong sense of justice36
Other negative personality traits (character flaws): Stubborn, she feels she is always right37
Other details-38
Hobbies: Sword Fighting, drawing, painting and pottery39
Skills: writing, she's a very good writer and a very good horsewoman. She loves horses40
Smells: Always smells of Jasmine, it's her favorite.41
Favorite color: Blue, she always wears blue shirts or something blue42
Favorite food: Beef Lo Mein, she loves it43
Favorite beverage: Diet Coke- She could live off the stuff44
Favorite music: Mostly Bollywood, she loves those movies after all she speaks the language. 45
Favorite clothing: Her black boots, they were her mothers. Even though their too big she still wears them. 46
Describe this character's home: A very stylish ranch, built from wood much like a cabin. The house is set back somewhat from the road, it is surrounded by the fifty acres the family owns. 47
Brownie Points:48
What complications arise from this character?49
When her father refuses to listen to reason Helena decides to leave on her own. Her stepmother is cruel and doesn't love Helena like she should. She beats her when her father is away at work, Rachel is too young and doesn't know what is happening is wrong. When Helena finally fights back and injures her stepmother she suddenly feels guilty. She runs away heading off into the woods which surround their home. 50
Comments/Notes:51
Helena's father works at the ranch, he sells cattle and horse stock for a living. They make a pretty good amount from it, he attends national competitions and sells thousand dollar colts and fillies. Helena hates her stepmother, who in turn hates horses. 52
Helena has problems and often seeks council with Ethan, a man who lives a few miles from them. He's in his twenties and Helena finds herself infatuated with him.
Author notes
I hope this is something that interests you, you can change whatever you like.. I just thought I would toss something out there. lol.
In a list
A contest entry
- Create a Character! by Adelaide Blood.
175 points, ended October 12, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Answer Honestly and Truthfully..what did you think? : )
Comments
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Okay well...
"Sense of humor: She's had a hard life, it's difficult for her to laugh at anything"
"Laughs at: Everything, she's very outgoing"
They contradict each other and pose as confusion, or as if you put a little less though into it, but the added plot to her, the that shows that the careless mistake portrays a false ideal, and that you truly did put a lot of though into this, so thank you in abundance for the entry! ^^
Good luck!

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Awww.. darn it.. I was gonna change that... thanks for bringing that up. I worked on it for about a half hour, deciding what I was going to put down. Those two questions got changed at the last minute, so sorry the one didn't get changed.
It's fixed now so there's no confusion.. I hope that is better...
Thanks for the comment,
Hanako
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