Only Faint Rays Of Moonlight (The Plumeria: Book2)

Only faint rays of moonlight crept through the sheltering darkness of the room. The rays that outlined the tapestries of the ancient times when the country was divided. The unfortunate young tyrant stood staring into the night-set jungle below his window, exposing his bare tan back to the door. No sound had betrayed the two assassins who stood in the doorway, but Sharce felt their comforting presence, and his heart lept and he smiled with comfort. 1

"You came!" Sharce exclaimed trying to hold back the tears of joy, yet he kept his exposed back to them lest his face betray his feelings. "And yet, I had hoped that I would be able to see you both before it was my time to die." The two assassins stepped closer, and Sharce could hear Tanya's dainty footsteps that jingled with the ringlets and bells around her young ankles and Tobias's familiar stride that had become stronger and more confident with his new found manhood. The two ceased to continue, how could they kill their once loved companion?2

Tanya's vision became blurry with tears, but she was still able to see Tobias courageously walk up next to the unfortunate tyrant and stand next to him in silence. She noted how they both stood with their black-haired heads staring into the emptiness of the floor, with their long muscular legs apart, and their hands folded in front of them. Both the tyrant and the assassin shared the same bone structure, and Tanya observed how the moonlight outlined the identical curves in their exposed back. Only their apparel distinguished their identities. 3

Tobias was the first to speak after the long silence. 4

"Sharce, why?" 5

"You know why. I was a victim to Ocorous's lies. I wanted his love and approval all my life... and then I received it.... but not without a price. I sold my loyalty to my true family to him, my blood family."6

"Sharce, you betrayed us! All of us! Mother, Kat, Lari, Galena, Auntie Seph, Uncle Shar, Tanya, and me!"7

Sharce bit down hard on his lip causing it to bleed in hopes that his physical pain would block out the painful truth ringing in his ears.8

"I know now what a mistake it was to call Ocorous father. There is nothing more in the world that I regret more than taking his side in the war against my family that raised me from birth."9

For the first time, Tobias looked into his brother's eyes. 10

"You know that our forces surround the city."11

"I let them come"12

"But it is to your benefit to know that we would never destroy our home."13

"Yes, but I am done with this fight. I know you have come to destroy me"14

Tobias felt a warm liquid run down his face and brushed it aside. 15

"You know, there is another way out of this. Death is not the only answer." he said.16

"How can I live as a traitor? And if you don't kill me, the people will. I am already defeated."17

"Everyone makes mistakes..."18

"Tobias! Does everyone takes sides with an insane power-loving father in an attempt to take over the Southwestern World by going to war against the kind people who raised me in hopes to overthrow Uncle Shar and Auntie Sephy? No, I could not live with it. How Ocorous manipulated my mind was a crime on his part, and a misfortune on mine, never-the-less it can never be undone and I must live with the consequences."19

Tanya's bells around her feet softly rang as she walked up next to her beloved cousins.20

"Sharce, we forgive you. Just call out your armies and come home... please"21

With a sigh Sharce replied, "You are much wiser than I, how could I have ever thought of overthrowing your parents and exiling you? Yes, that was my intention... that is what I became. No, this is my only destiny."22

Sharce turned to his cousin whom he had grown up with and looked down at her beautiful soft face and doe-like eyes (which were filled with tears)that she had inherited from her mother, the Empress. He affecionatly touched her hair, then wiped a tear from her cheek. Silently he reached for the dagger slung at her waist.23

Tobias took a step forward in fear, and Tanya froze as still as death. "Don't worry, you two are the only assassins in this room" answered Sharce in response to their actions. Sharce held the dagger and gazed at the magnificently carved 15 inch blade. The young tyrant put it into the hands of his brother, and ceremoniously knelt down before his cousin keeping his face to the ground, "You are the true heir to the Empire, before I pass into the next world, I can only dream that you would forgive me for my betrayal." Tanya didn't;t know whether to smile or weep, so she did a combination of both and replied without hesitation, "It has already been done."24

For the first time in his life, Tobias thought that Tanya looked like the Empress that she was born to be. Sharce stood up and pressed his for head to his brother's forehead then whispered, "I only wish that you remember me before my corruption... before Ocorous poisoned my mind." "Of course, for that is the only brother I know." Sharce smiled for the first time in years, then returned to his stoic self once more.25

Sharce knelt down in from of his brother and said, "I quote from the mysterious writer of the ancient times, 'O happy dagger!26

This is thy sheath; there rust, and let me die.'" No words were spoken for seconds, nor were they needed. Tanya ran out of the room for she did not have the strength to bare to see Tobias carry out Sharce's will.27

After a minute's time, Tobias came out of the room carrying his brother's limp body and handed the crimson dagger to his cousin. She pulled out a vial from her satchel and emptied out the precious golden sand inside it into a vase in the hallway. This sand was from the forgotten island and was priceless to her people, yet, she filled the vial with her cousin's last drops of blood that still hung on the dagger. 28

Tobias and Tanya could not eat or sleep for a week, and stayed indoors in silence. They spoke of this night to no one, and no one dared to ask. They buried him in the Garden of kings outside the palace. Sharce's name changed from a shout to a murmur, then from a murmur to a whisper, then from a whisper to a glace, then it was lost in the swells of time. Only Tobias and Tanya spoke of their cousin, and although the people of the Empire forgot his name, Tobias and Tanya passed his memory on to their children and grandchildren.29

Author notes

This is a very very small part of my very very long story called The Plumeria which focuses on 5 different generations in a fictional dynasty. (a plumeria has 5 petals= 5 generations= 5 letters in Laura= why do you think I wear a silver chain with a plumeria on it or a 5 pointed star?)

I may not have been clear with the motives of all the characters or the society in with they lived, if not tell me. Actually I changed some of their names from less weird names to these names as to not confuse you all, and even so, they are still weird names lol

As far as the politics of this, I would have to explain a really long history of their world, which I doubt you would want me to do lol. (I have been working on this story since 7th grade, so it is REALLY long and complex even though I stayed away from writing in the names of places, the languaged they spoke, etc etc etc.)

*That line that Sharce quoted from was from Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet... This takes place WAY in the future and almost everything from our world is lost, actually, the only thing that wasn;t lost was a small collection of books from the \

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  • Shahrazad
    April 4, 2005
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    Thanks for your critique! I really appreciate it. Yes, those parenthesis are REALLY out of place and I'll change it. I'm glad you enjoyed it )... As far as the names go, here are the REAL ones I made up for the characters though I'm thinking about changing them...
    Sharce= Sharcador,
    Tanya= Satiana(Tiana),
    Tobias= Tonduri(Tondu) I heard it somewhere and I think it is a name from India)
    Anyways I'm thinking about posting a lot more of my series on this site, though it is hard to do being that this site only has room for poems and SHORT stories.... but little by little I'll post certain chapters.

    You've written a novel? I'd love to read it! (I'm amazed that you've created a language for it as well. I create the NAMES of certain languages but not the actual rules and vocab for it! Though I've made up dozens of scripts and runes)

    Again, thanks for your encouragement, I'll let you know once I have written more. )


  • Frozen Roses
    March 31, 2005
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    Perfect!!!!!!!

    I love this! The feeling of this story is so wonderful. And you have written it out so wonderfully. I would love to read the entire story. Oh and I would like to know the names and all of that, that you changed when you put it up here. I love stories with unique names and words, they help set the feeling of the story. Heck you should read my novel. I have been creating a language for them, and love to speak it!
    The concept of this story is wonderful. You have done well with develeping the characters. Though a short piece here, I really got a sence of how they are. The only thing that I saw that I would change is where you say: 'Sharce turned to his cousin whom he had grown up with and looked down at her beautiful soft face and doe-like eyes (which were filled with tears)that she had inherited from her mother, the Empress.' The part with the () makes the line kind of jumpy, more like a note that you left in there when you were still in the first draft. Try something like, "her beautiful soft face and tear dampened, doe-like eyes." Or something like that.
    The Shakespeare quote is perfect, gives the reader something to connect to. I love that!
    You wear a plumeria necklace, thats cool. I think once you work on a story for so long that it becomes a part of you.
    I'm glad I read this! And now I WANT to read the whole story. Really this has gotten me hooked.

    P.S. Oh by the way, I love the Title.

    ~Rhiannon~


  • March 17, 2005
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    I enjoyed reading this piece. It was very rich in emotion, the only thing I had a hard time with when reading your piece was keeping up whith the names. Aside from that this was a wonderful piece and i look forward to hearing more of the story.

  • Through Your Iris
    March 17, 2005
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    I always wondered what the necklace stood for!!! Anyway, the story was good but it ended kind of abruptly, but you said it was a small part so you can throw away that critique. I'm gonna be really nitpicky, lol sorry. The part with the paraenthesis, I think you should just find a way to add the tears part into the actual line because the () jus seem kind of weird in a story. That's my opinion though. You could feel the character's emotion well and you had good imagery to set the scene in the beginning. I really like how you use Shakespeare and say he is mysterious because he is so well known now, you can't help but wonder OMG IT'S SHAKESPEARE! LoL, but I do think it could have been deeper and a little more told about the society. Overall though, I liked it a lot, the creativity and the conflicts are great. I think this may be the longest REAL comment I have ever wrote! Great job on this though and good luck with the rest of the epic story!
    Edited on Mar 17, 7:13 p.m. because 'Forgot el wordo.'.