I cut myself to ease the pain.1
The pain no one can understand.2
The pain I have to face alone.3
When no-ones around me to lend a hand.4
I cut myself to ease the pain.5
That would gradully build up and up.6
Until I was left feeling hopeless, and angry.7
No physical strength ro repeatedly getup.8
I cut myself to ease the pain.9
That would mentally destroy me.10
I would loose my head.11
And dangerously become deadly.12
I cut myself to ease the pain.13
The blood that drips is my sorrow.14
That leaves my body, draining my angst.15
So that I'm ready for tomorrow.16
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gradully build << **gradually.
Thanks for commenting on my poem Your Turn to Hurt...I definately agree with you...about the whole users coming back after they've been used thing. Anyhow...great poem, keep up the good work.
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I've just read it back, and I know I can write like that naturally. I just have a really bad case of writers block.
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wow this is powerful... i don't know what else to say than that...
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are u really 11
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brill
wow that is brill and just wonderin do people think you are wiered cose people think i am cose i am 12 and one girl said i needed therapy lol
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Wow, another great write by you, delisioulsy dark,lol. personally I liked the third stanza the best, but personally my favorite lines that mea the most to me are
'The blood that drips is my sorrow.
That leaves my body, draining my angst.'
Good job you should be proud!
Eden
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Yes this was short but sometimes the shorter it is, the sweeter it is. Very good write and I'll look out for more writes by you.
~'~lost conscious~'~
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