Booooring!

»Hey Joe«1

»Hey Billy«2

»Wanna do something today?«3

»Sure Billy!Watcha wanna do?«4

»Actually I don't know!Any ideas?«5

»Na Billy, don't have a clue«6

»Wanna dance naked in the cornfield?«7

»Na Billy, we did that yesterday, it was boring!«8

»Wanna go treasure fishin?«9

»Na Billy, we were doing that for a year now, and we never caught anything«10

»Well maybe we didn't have the right lure«11

»Billy!We tried almost everything! What do you want to use as a lure?«12

»We haven't tried it with a mouse.«13

»Na Billy! If the dog and the cat didn' work how will this?«14

»Then let's try dancing in da lake, maybe we'll catch something.«15

»Oh Billy, what a fine idea!Let's go!«16

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I wanted to see how mad you'll be when you have read this piece Please tell me just how you feel now....
I'm sure you could write a poem full of hate right about now...lol...i said it was boring...lol,at least i'm having fun

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  • Swadhi
    January 24, 2006
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    Lovely...

  • DistantWorld
    March 24, 2005
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    This was so random. So funny, this didn't make me mad a t all, quite the opposite. But this is hilarious, so very hilarious. YOu are so awesome, I love you, you dork.
    Bella


  • dame de la riviere
    March 21, 2005
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    hilarious

    lol you're serious random john...random, but funny...interesting style...good cause it made me laug but may i ask how prey tell does one "dance in a lake"?

  • theunkwoncontestant
    March 20, 2005
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    First of all, thank you so much for the second place! (It's rather funny because I truly hate that poem The Mirror....but no matter...) Second of all, I love this poem. It's so true and made me laugh. Nice job!


  • thewriterwithin
    March 17, 2005
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    lmfao! That was suppose to make me mad? It didn't lmao. That was funny. Hahaha, I really liked it though because it was short. It was kind of weird though, but weird is good. ANyway, great work.

    Take Care,
    Jasmine

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