»Hey Joe«1
»Hey Billy«2
»Wanna do something today?«3
»Sure Billy!Watcha wanna do?«4
»Actually I don't know!Any ideas?«5
»Na Billy, don't have a clue«6
»Wanna dance naked in the cornfield?«7
»Na Billy, we did that yesterday, it was boring!«8
»Wanna go treasure fishin?«9
»Na Billy, we were doing that for a year now, and we never caught anything«10
»Well maybe we didn't have the right lure«11
»Billy!We tried almost everything! What do you want to use as a lure?«12
»We haven't tried it with a mouse.«13
»Na Billy! If the dog and the cat didn' work how will this?«14
»Then let's try dancing in da lake, maybe we'll catch something.«15
»Oh Billy, what a fine idea!Let's go!«16
Author notes
I wanted to see how mad you'll be when you have read this piece
Please tell me just how you feel now....
I'm sure you could write a poem full of hate right about now...lol...i said it was boring...lol,at least i'm having fun 
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Lovely...
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This was so random. So funny, this didn't make me mad a t all, quite the opposite. But this is hilarious, so very hilarious. YOu are so awesome, I love you, you dork.
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hilarious
lol you're serious random john...random, but funny...interesting style...good cause it made me laug
but may i ask how prey tell does one "dance in a lake"?
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First of all, thank you so much for the second place! (It's rather funny because I truly hate that poem The Mirror....but no matter...) Second of all, I love this poem. It's so true and made me laugh. Nice job!
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lmfao! That was suppose to make me mad? It didn't lmao. That was funny. Hahaha, I really liked it though because it was short. It was kind of weird though, but weird is good. ANyway, great work.
Take Care,
Jasmine
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