Right there in your heart

How do you capture a smile filled with love 1

A heart that flutters like the wings of a dove 2

A mood that feels like you never felt before3

A day that makes you hunger for more 4

A room filled with people who love you so much 5

And champagne and flowers with that magical touch 6

A bride dressed in silk and crystals and lace 7

As radiant wonder shines from her face 8

At her groom as he stares in awe at his bride9

While they cling to each other with love and with pride10

There’s nothing can keep it except some in part 11

So capture that moment right there in your heart. 12

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    This poem was beautiful.
    The lines were short but the impact and emotions where heartfelt and the message behind the poem was a very brave and spiritual one. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I think you have done a choice job.

    ♣ Blake