Walking, walking and walking on the silent paths was she, Julie, lonely, tired, shattered and torn apart. She had walked for so long that every inch of flesh hurted! Through frosty winters, fire snarling summers, short-lived springs and endless autumns she walked but the journey wasdn't over! Ahead was the veil of mist and behind was immense cloud of blackness!1
So, as she hadn't walked an inch cuz she was still there where she started. With bleeding feet she was dragging herself on the life's journey though she new it was no use but she was stiff now, she had killed her last wish of having the long, endless, peaceful sleep or maybe it was there somewhere but she never showed it! She was a living corpse and the last tears went almost centuries ago. Her eyes were stony! But how amazing it was that her walk was so steady! Did the winds know that she was so tired and broken!2
A voice broke the dead silence saying "Julie!"3
She thought it her imagination cuz there was no one ever who would call her name4
"Julie!"5
It was a soft voice she turned around without any expression cuz there were none left6
A shadow aroused! She whispered "Daniel!"7
In a defeated voice she said "You're here, how come, why?"8
He looked at her and grief filled his face then he said;9
"I was always here Julie but you never felt me, never, I always was around you cuz I loved you! Julie let me tell you today that I LOVE YOU"10
Julie: (long lost tears in her eyes) *strangely* "Daniel"11
*laughs* "you are joking, no one ever loved me or cared, It's a dream another mad one from my fantasy land"12
Daniel: *whispers* "I love you!"13
Julie: Oh Daniel! Don't betray me Daniel, Don't lie plz! Oh14
Daniel comes near her and whispers in a torn voice "I'm late, you look so torn, so shattered" (with dismay)" And you never called me!"15
She sits down on the ground for the first time in centuries: "I'm tired, I think I'm! Yes you are late, I'm so tired where were you! This love-sick girl always wished just a single caring glanse!" *faints* Then slowly opens her eyes and sees him sitting close, crying She puts her head on his shoulder and whispers "Let me sleep forever with a feeling that someone loves me, that someone atleast cares, OH! Let me have that peaceful sleep forever!"16
He pats her head and places his lips on her hairs tears trickle from both eyes! And then the last breath escapes Julie's throat and she sleeps forever! And Daniel knows she's gone so he silently closes his eyes and they both sleep the endless long sleep, They go where neither the wounds nor the severe pains could harm there! Wind gently brushes them and Fate smiles and says17
-----------"GOODBYE"-------------18
Author notes
Hey that's my first story don't know how it is just suggest the best but I just felt and wrote nothing else!
Comments
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This is like a long rambling poem. I like the story but you should color it in more with description. It's got a lot to offer and I'd like to see more installments, what lead up to the couples long sleep.
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sister stories kab say start ho gayee?...
And i know u hae expressed ur own feelings in it...lovely way of expression..and also the use of word daniel..nice..

