Dreams

A LOST YOUNG PETAL1

WONDERING SOULS2

I SEE THE DREAM YOU SEEK3

FOLLOW ME PLEASE,IF YOU DARE.4

THE DREAM IS COMING5

FOR YOU AND ME6

I RETURN BY YOUR SIDE7

WITH A HERAT IN MY HAND.8

IT IS LIKE A BRIGHT FIRE DANCING9

TO THE SLOW MSIC TURNING.10

MY HERAT AS SMOOTH AS IVORY11

HAS TURNED TO A LONELY,SULFUR.12

I RETIRE MY HEART NOW TO YOU,13

LOVE ME BECAUSE I LOVE YOU.

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  • kiki Cullen
    December 18, 2008

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    woah!!!!!!!!!!!!
    its very very very
    emotion lol^^ but
    very good sis keep it up ok♥

  • KixiusMaximusArsus
    September 15, 2008

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    Wow! That was beautiful! I loved it! This just flows so well, and it has so much emotion and thought put into such a little amount of words. You did a great job with this piece! I absolutely loved it! Great job Sky!!